Chapter 83

Not only Han Liang, but also at night, Zhao Youyue noticed the book review area that the best king exploded. After all, the night is the peak period for many readers to read. After reading, if someone reads it very well, someone will praise the author in the book review area, or even make complaints about the author directly.

Emerge in an endless stream make complaints about Zhao Youyue make complaints about the more than 100 chapters of "Yu Sheng fan". There are many words such as "embarrassment", "poison", "spitting blood", "spicy eyes" and "intolerance to direct".

"What the hell is this female character 'Yu Shengfan'? Is rosemary going to appoint her as the mistress? If so, I will definitely abandon the book. It's too poisonous! "

"It seems that I saw the description of the vase lady in the ancient online article. Rosemary is very big. I advise you to save it. Really don't write female characters anymore. It's embarrassing and cancer has been committed..."

"Yu Shengfan, get out of the strongest king, or you will absolutely abandon the book!"

"E-sports doesn't need a girlfriend. Kneel down and beg Lin Feng to be lonely all his life!"

"As an old reader of rosemary, this scene is so familiar. You'd better recognize it and stop writing female characters!"

"I was relieved to see that everyone felt the same as me. Rosemary's great skill in plot and game description is really deep, but the portrayal of this female character is really hot eyes..."

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When Zhao youyue saw the exploding book review area, she couldn't help stroking her forehead. She just hoped that rosemary could have stronger psychological endurance and waited for her to enter the strongest king when she went to bed tonight to save "Yu Shengfan".

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Meanwhile, ye Hai was tucking out by his love wife Li Mengyao, because Li Mengyao was also his reader, and liked to make complaints about her husband's book.

Li Mengyao usually reads books on a tablet. She pointed to the description of "Yu Shengfan" and complained to Ye Hai: "I said why did you suddenly write female characters? You can't write female characters at all. Why don't you admit this..."

Ye Hai looked embarrassed and said with a smile: "in fact, it's not my fault. It's just a dragon suit asked by a local tyrant reader. You see, she has rewarded me 2000 yuan for this book. She is the first ally fan of this book!"

Li Mengyao looked at the fan list. The first one was indeed an ally leader nicknamed "youyue". The other party not only rewarded the book, but also subscribed to it. However, she said, "do you think you have successfully flattered the local tyrant readers? Obviously, it's just to offend others. Write someone's Dragon suit like this. I'm afraid there won't be any reward in the future! "

When Li Mengyao said this, she couldn't help thinking of the image of a heroine portrayed by Ye Hai based on her. Although it was not as flashy, Mary Sue and embarrassing as "Yu Shengfan", the subsequent description really made her want to kick her husband to death. It was definitely a high-level black bar, which portrayed the heroine as so silly, white and sweet and virgin's disease, She knew that her husband should want to focus on depicting the kindness and innocence of the female Lord, but when she wrote it, the feeling of the female Lord was particularly artificial and annoying. Anyway, it's best not to see for the net.

So when her husband said he wanted to write more about the interaction between male and female owners and show the beauty of love, Li Mengyao resolutely stopped her husband's behavior and almost forced her to die!

Well, it's just an exaggeration

What makes Li Mengyao very helpless is that ye Hai doesn't seem to realize how bad he is in portraying female characters. He also likes to show his merit to her - wife, wife, look at how I write this paragraph. Does it portray you very pleasing to readers?

Like? Like a ghost!

It's good not to hate it. I still like it. Don't dream!

Wake up, my great writer Ye!

Finally, under the strong intervention of Li Mengyao, the female owner based on her finally disappeared, and she can finally chase the book happily.

For awesome new king bromance, Li Mengyao has been very satisfied because there are no female characters, and the plot is also very hot, very exciting and passionate. The setting of the eternal war is quite new. After joining the elements of online games, the works become more plump and attractive. At the same time, it also makes her very much look forward to the main play E-sports part in the later stage, waiting for the protagonist to lead his "Quanhua class" and the Korean E-sports team led by the hard "big demon king".

As a result, he actually blocked her by portraying female characters!

Seeing the embarrassed look on Ye Hai's face, Li Mengyao couldn't help laughing and said, "ha ha, am I right?"

Ye Hai took out his mobile phone, opened his chat box with Zhao youyue, directly showed the chat record to his wife, and said, "my local tyrant reader's temper is still very good, but it's much better than you at that time."

After reading the chat record, Li Mengyao couldn't help sighing: "miss youyue is really rich. If you don't agree, you'll be rewarded with 100000 starting coins. As a result, you'll spoil someone's Dragon suit like this. I'm also drunk! Did you treat the leader so badly? Also, what is better than what I was then, people do not know that you are depicting the Yu Sheng fan with her prototype, and what I have to do with you, of course, you can directly Tucao, people just become QQ friends with you, you can make complaints about euphemism, and it is really impossible to estimate.

Ye Hai smiled awkwardly. At this time, he looked at the book review area where he exploded. He couldn't help feeling guilty and said, "should I directly hide this female character? Do you have any suggestions?"

That's right, but he has actually decided in his heart to try to use the suggestions given to him by the leader of the [youyue] alliance. It can be regarded as his last struggle. If he still can't satisfy the readers, he will completely accept his fate and will never portray female characters again.

"Try it! I always support you anyway. I can't help it. As a wife, I don't know how to write books except playing games with you, cooking for you and taking care of your children. However, I feel that the suggestions given by the other party seem to be useful. If you can make up for your shortcomings in portraying female characters, maybe you can take a bigger step on the road of writing! " Li Mengyao smiled. In fact, she had already seen the decision in her husband's heart. Of course, she chose to support it.

Sure enough, ye Hai breathed a sigh of relief. He just held his wife's hand and said nothing.

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That night, when Zhao youyue was sleeping, she skillfully opened the "dimensional door" in her mind and entered it.

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