Chapter 91

Although Ye Hai's wife Li Mengyao supports her husband to try that new way of depicting female roles, that is, depicting them according to the way her husband used to depict male roles, and then insisting that it was a female role. If the male role was a handsome man, she insisted that she was a beautiful woman, but they have little difference in character.

However, she still asked her husband to show her the content before updating, so as to avoid the hot eyed female character description.

"I've been writing very well recently, especially when portraying the character Yu Shengfan in [the sound of rain at night], I feel like I'm writing, as if I saw her appear in front of me and play a game called eternal war! I can no longer write her grandiose and false, because she is real! She is a very interesting girl. She falls in love with games because she is lonely, and even proficient in many languages for games. She also likes to play games while talking... "Ye Hai said to his wife excitedly when she handed over the saved manuscript to his wife.

When Li Mengyao saw Ye Hai's appearance that she didn't seem to have come out of the world under her pen, she couldn't help believing it, because in the past, ye Hai was in a state of "burst of inspiration" many times. Whenever he was in that state, the speed and efficiency of codewords seemed very high!

Even the text quality has been improved. Ye Hai, who is already good at male character depiction and game pictures, makes his character depiction more lifelike, and that kind of picture feeling can make readers immersive!

If the words written by Rosemary in the general state are of the great God level, the words written by Rosemary in the "burst of inspiration" state are of the highest god level, which can easily mobilize the readers' emotions and immerse the readers into the world outlined by him!

Ye Hai also handed over the release of the draft to his wife Li Mengyao, and then plunged into writing. He wanted to write more while he was in good condition.

Li Mengyao also raised a great sense of expectation. As a result, she finished reading the saved manuscript at one breath, and then couldn't help but say to her husband, who was typing in a crackling way: "is there anything else, is there anything else? Not enough! I really want to see Lin Feng and Tang Yongkai find that [the sound of rain at night] is actually the story of a peerless beauty that they couldn't see. I really look forward to their reaction... "

As a result, only Ye Hai's very rhythmic code sound responded to her. Seeing her husband's efforts, she also showed a trace of tenderness on her face. She began to look at the saved manuscript again and was ready to correct her husband's typos.

To her surprise, there was no typo in the manuscript of more than 10000 words!

That's great!

It's really done at one go!

However, what makes her more gratified is actually her husband's subsequent shaping of the female role of "Yu Shengfan". She originally thought that the almost exaggerated marisu role was hopeless and could not be liked by readers any more. However, after reading the manuscript, she felt that the role was very interesting!

The original character image of "Yu Shengfan" is extremely empty and pale. It looks perfect, but in fact it is very fake. The behavior of driving a luxury car to an Internet cafe can be sprayed out of sight by readers who pay more attention to rationality. The forced explanation behind can only barely fool the readers. But when the real character characteristics of Yu Shengfan are displayed, this favorite game The "Internet addicted girl" addicted to PK seems to become friendly and so vivid

And her most adorable place is undoubtedly her mouth that can't stop. Of course, it is reflected in the game, that is, the text bubble that almost always won't disappear on her head. If this kind of person appears in reality and appears as an opponent when playing the game, he will hate this guy who likes constant BB ridicule, but it appears in the book, like this "chatter" "Poisonous tongue" has become a cute attribute, especially after readers see the follow-up plot and find that this guy is likely to become the protagonist's teammate.

Readers who substitute Lin Feng as the protagonist will naturally have a + 20 liking for the role of the protagonist camp. In addition, the role of "Yu Shengfan" doesn't look like a pig teammate. Her operation technology is so powerful that she hasn't even exposed all her strength. If she can work with Lin Feng, how powerful will the "glory team" be in the future?

In a word, the subsequent depiction of "Yu Shengfan" in the content of the manuscript has further improved the expectation of the whole work at once, because the subsequent depiction is so wonderful that everyone subconsciously forgot the description of the hot eyes at the beginning, and only remembered her identity as the big lady of the chaebol and the setting that she is proficient in many languages, This is simply convenient. In the future, when she is against the e-sports teams of other countries, she will spray, ridicule and make trouble to her heart's content!

Yu Shengfan is a girl who makes trouble and pulls up hatred steadily. In this way, it is obvious that the plot can become more exciting and exciting. Yu Shengfan can be responsible for pulling hatred, while Lin Feng, who is full of lead, stable and calm, likes to hide his edge, is specially responsible for outputting and beating his face, occasionally showing his edge and pretending to be a big force. Isn't it beautiful?

One is the king with strong mouth and the other is the strongest king. When they cooperate, the picture is so beautiful that they can't bear to see it!

In fact, setting "Yu Shengfan" as a lonely girl without any friends is a hint to the reader that once she becomes a recognized friend, she will definitely intervene for her friend. If "Yu Shengfan" is regarded as a man, it is not against him at all. Who can be his friend with this "one wolf" character, Who can turn the "lone wolf" into a "loyal dog", this routine is common in the novel, and readers eat this set.

Obviously, ye Hai has applied the way of portraying male characters to "Yu Shengfan". He no longer regards "Yu Shengfan" as an indispensable supporting role, but an important supporting role. He doesn't even realize that he didn't do the setting of this character, but he believes that it is the product of his inspiration, He is very satisfied with this character anyway, and extremely prefers the first female character he wrote so sentimentally. He thinks he has finally portrayed a female character with soul!

Whether the reader is satisfied or not, he must write like this!

No one can stop the creator who has been "above"!

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