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Name: Mo Wang

Title: Heavenly Demon Monarch/ Ruler of evil       

Race: Primordial Chaos Fiend 

Physique: Yin Yang body (All attribute body)

Meridians: Ancient Nefarious Blood Vessels

Bloodline: Seven-Colour Myriad Bloodline

Luck: Heaven-defying bad luck (Abandon all hope! you are bound to die a dogs death) 

Mo Wang was speechless, there is a limit. How much somebody could bully someone else! His heart was filled glee, but the moment his eyes fall on Heaven-defying bad luck all happiness in heart was extinguished.

Luck might seem to be something that is  minuscule, but in reality, the most important thing for a cultivator is luck. A useless trash can become an unparalleled genius all treasure and inheritance will fall into his hands, for this only luck was needed.

This is unfairness of heaven, only those chosen by heaven can walk on path of cultivation. That why Mo Wang was such dangerous existence. Possessing a talent so great that even overpowered luck.

He wasn't a talent that can be only seen once every million years or a miracle, there will no second Mo Wang for eternity, but nobody understood the path he walked was million times tougher then a normal person, the opportunities didn't fall into his lap, instead he had fought on the brink of death for every single opportunity.

He had lost the count of how many times! he had wanted to quit, fall in a long peaceful sleep. Yet, he was forced to continue that journey, even in this world. Simply because heaven will not allow it, trouble will keep coming towards him. So, why shouldn't he take everything for himself.

Now his rotten luck turned into Heaven-defying bad luck, heaven truly loved toying with him didn't it!

Mo Wang broke into laughter

"HAHAHAHAHHAAH, in the end. Just what the hell? Did I do to deserve this fate." It was a laughter filled with grief. He couldn't understand why heaven must be so cruel to him, he only wanted his parent's love and a happy family, he wasn't even granted this simple wish.

"Maybe its retribution for your sins." Yao Mei answered in a cool tone, as she calmly walked towards Mo Wang. 

"I wasn't always a fiend, who took pleasure in slaughter!" Mo Wang stopped there and did not speak anymore, because it made him remember some bad memories.

"Why don't you continue fallen prince of righteousness, a man who once aspired to be hero. Ended up becoming most evil being under heaven, quite pathetic isn't it!" Mo Wang glared at Yao Mei, but didn't say anything, because it was absolute truth, something he didn't want to remember.

That why he had sealed his memories, but the seal was broken in his confrontation against  heart demon, letting him regain his repulsive memories. 

"You know better then anyone. No matter which path you take, either of a saint or a demon. Heaven will never forgive you." Yao Mei whispered into Mo Wang ears.

Saint don't make him laugh! He will never justify his actions, it doesn't matter! what he desired to become in past, but the present him, was a cruel tyrant who wiped out trillions of life forms without mercy.

Should he accept his destiny, submit to his fate. No, he refuse to accept such a fate, he will never bow down to destiny. Since heaven won't forgive me, I will ruin heaven.

"Yao Mei there something I don't understand. When did I become ruler of evil?" Mo Wang was called many things in his previous life, but this was the first time somebody called him ruler of evil.

"This title is something you gained after your rebirth using negativity of entire dimension." Mo Wang face showed an expression of utter shock.

"Doesn't it mean! I'm screwed, till those old monsters aren't vegetable. They would notice my existence." Mo Wang really felt pitifully, he had just experienced death and had been reborn, yet he was going to die again.

Yao Mei was enjoying Mo Wang pitiful face, she spoke in an assuring tone"You don't need worry, I already have hidden your location."

"You were so excited about Heaven-defying bad luck, that you didn't even glance at your innate skills." 

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Hey Guys, 

How many of you thought it was Heaven-defying luck instead of bad luck.

The most cliché thing is objects falling on your lap, so I tried changing it. 

What do you think?

Does this story have any potential or should I drop it