Chapter 101

It will be on the shelves at noon tomorrow. Let's see if the first order can break through the single digit.

First of all, I have a problem with the rhythm of the previous plot.

In addition, there is insufficient performance in the dialogue of characters and the shaping of artistic conception.

In particular, character dialogue is my short item for the time being, but I will try to improve it.

With regard to the rhythm of the early stage, it can be said responsibly that the framework of the whole main line story is very complete, but there are problems in the way of unfolding the story. Some places are eager to set and introduce it.

Sort out the current plot.

The first volume is the development of male owners, which tells the male owners from having nothing to having a pile of industries.

We have our own scientific research company to our own equipment production company. In this process, we have obtained an old scientist left over from history and a pile of unfinished technologies. At the same time, we have also obtained an intelligent AI.

And I have an acceleration skill and try to explore ways to improve people's potential.

Relying on these foundations, the male owner has the ability to develop any product according to needs, and put his black technology into practice.

To tell you the truth, this part is not well written, because it is purely to pave the way for the later content, especially at the end of the first volume.

The second volume is called military industry, or the iron man of men.

With the foreshadowing in front, the man is now in the same situation as iron man or master Batman.

You can rely on your own R & D strength and financial resources to open various stories temporarily.

Then in this process, the system suddenly guided the male host to a task to quell the war in a war-torn area, and the reward was super battery.

But this task seems not simple. From this task, the male leader is gradually guided by the system to a series of events, and the background story of the whole world is gradually unfolded in this process.

Another small thing is that when writing this work, the second God in the science fiction area opened a new book. Like me, the protagonist has the ability to see the relevant values of other people's attributes and potential, and can get various rewards by helping others,

At the end of the first episode, the man looked in the mirror and exclaimed how I was a scum.

I read it. I can tell stories much better than I can. In order not to crash in the later plot, I cut off some daily stories of development and hurriedly began to tell settings. That paragraph was written unprepared, but now it has slowed down.

Since others are mainly using the system in the city, I'll quickly change the direction. The main scenes of the next story will be put on the battlefield.

According to the ability of the male owner and the male owner's company.

Battlefield is undoubtedly a better place to play.

In short, now the male owner has a company that can realize all kinds of strange inventions, and has a brain that can accelerate. Later, he will continue to improve his ability. The battlefield is a more convenient place to show.

At the same time, this was also an important part of the original outline, but I weakened the development in the city and made this part of the plot come earlier.

Of course, we started military industry very early, so it will be more natural when we enter the universe later.