16 Question a possible rewrite

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Okay first of I managed to finish writing early for my other novel. Leaving me with some spare time to write a chapter for Sunday morning and possibly write another for the night.

I also want to tackle the discussion of Rose being too spoiled and honestly, I got lost in writing and didn't even noticed until you guys mentioned it was also cause I got lazy. So I'll apologise for that.

So I'm gonna rewrite the last chapter to show more of her being an understanding, and you know I can't have the main attractions lose its fans. Also, I think I might add something to her that becomes kind of her signature/look@@