Chapter 850

Loyal reader

a moment later, a Feng came back from school. He heard a joke at school today, and he wanted to tell Lin Yuese.

But he did not find her in the living room. He tried to call her twice, but he never heard back.

In the end, he couldn't bear it any more. When he got to the study, Lin Yuese was still revising her manuscript, and was interrupted by a knock on the door.

A Feng hasn't seen Lin Yuese for almost a day, especially when she hasn't eaten dinner. He can't help but worry about it and wants to see what's going on with her.

She couldn't even afford to eat. She locked herself in her study and began to stay up late to revise the manuscript. She absorbed all the opinions put forward by the editor and made full revisions to the manuscript.

Lin Yuese knew that her manuscript might not be perfect, so she didn't resist the opinions of the editor.

The editor pointed out other mistakes in her manuscript very sharply and asked her to revise them before applying for final review.

The waiting time is very long. Lin Yuese is a little uneasy about the result, but the result is that she has passed the first trial.

"I'll change it again." Lin Yuese was a little disappointed and took the manuscript back to revise it again. Then she submitted it to the magazine and waited for the final result.

Although Su Jinyu seldom reads novels, after all, he has been in the shopping mall for such a long time and can see the problems at a glance.

"You have made some mistakes in these sentences, and they are too light to have any ups and downs, so that the readers don't have a strong sense of substitution when they read them."

Su Jinyu took the manuscript Lin Yuese handed to him and looked at it carefully. He soon found the problem and picked out the wrong one in Lin Yue's manuscript.

After thinking for a long time, she decided to ask Su Jinyu to see if he could help her find the problem.

A week later, she wrote a short story, but Lin Yuese felt that something was wrong, but she couldn't tell what was wrong.

In this way, after a week, Lin Yuese basically shut herself in her study and immersed herself in the mood of creation.

A Feng quietly went out, but also by the way to close the door, lest the outside noise interfered with Lin Yuese's creation.

"Then you go out to play first. Mommy will write for a while, and then go out to play with you." With that, she quickly entered the state, the sound of tapping the keyboard has never stopped.

Lin Yuese has some inspiration in her mind because of a Feng's sudden appearance. Now she wants to quickly record the inspiration in her mind, so Wen Yan nods her head and takes it as the default.

"Mommy, I won't disturb you. Please write slowly. I'll go out and play for a while." A Feng always feels that the atmosphere in his study is too serious, which makes him unable to sit down for a long time. He can't wait to go out and play.

Lin Yuese gently touched a Feng's head. Seeing his vigorous growth, she could only sigh that time had passed so fast. She was even in a trance. How did a Feng change from a baby to a young man with a tall and straight body in a twinkling of an eye.

"Well, you will be my number one reader in the future. You must give me more advice."

Lin Yuese was praised by a Feng, and the smile on her face could not be concealed. She hugged a Feng and gave him a grateful hug.

As a result, he had a great admiration for Lin Yuese. After all, Lin Yuese had seldom been in touch with novels before, but now she can write so well.

He really thinks that the article written by mommy is very good-looking. Although he can't understand the meaning of some words, both the description and the atmosphere are very good. He still wants to read it, and even wants to continue to read it.

Readers, I'll go after every article you write in the future. " Ah Feng said sincerely.

"No, mummy, your writing is excellent. From today on, I will be your loyal

she knows that she still has many shortcomings, so no matter who the other party is, she will humbly ask others for advice, even if the other party is a Feng.

"I'm writing novels at home now. If you have time, you can see if there are any shortcomings in my writing." Lin Yuese said modestly.

Smell speech, a Feng surprised looking at Lin Yuese, did not expect that this is Lin Yuese's novel, style and content are beyond his expectations.

Lin Yuese was amused by a Feng's reaction and explained to him in a soft voice: "fool, I'm writing a novel. I wrote it. Do you think it was written by someone else?"

"Mommy, are you reading a novel?" Feng askew head puzzled asked, he did not go to other aspects to think, see the document on the desktop think Lin Yuese is reading a novel.

"What do you think this is?" Lin Yue salad a Feng to the office desktop, pointed to the notebook, so that he can see the text on the screen.

He didn't come into the study. This is usually the place where Lin Yuese and Su Jinyu stay. In order not to disturb their work, a Feng doesn't go into the study."Mommy will show you what Mommy is doing." Lin Yuese takes a Feng's hand and leads him to the study. A Feng looks at the study curiously.

"Mommy, why have you been at home and not going out to work recently?" A Feng's puzzled mouth asks a way, he has not seen Lin Yuese go out to work for a long time, has been seeing her stay at home.

"Ah Feng, how did you come here?" When Lin Yuese sees a Feng, her impatience disappears. She gently asks, and her tone is very patient.

When she couldn't remember the new plot development, she banged on the door. She scratched her hair and got up from the office chair reluctantly. When she got to the door, she opened the door and saw a Feng standing outside.

At the moment, Lin Yuese is in her study. She is lying on the computer desk and is still immersed in the plots in her mind. Her mind is full of her own plots. In addition, the door of her study is tightly closed. Naturally, she can't hear the sound from outside.

A Feng felt that she must still be at home, but now he didn't find her. He came in sweating and decided to look for every room on the second floor to see if he could find her.

But she didn't go to work these two days. Did she go to work today?

"Mommy, are you there?" He frowned, good-looking face wrinkled together, around the villa looking for a circle, did not find the trace of Lin Yuese.

"What's the matter?" Lin Yuese was a little impatient.

Ah Feng blinked his eyes and said wrongly, "Mommy, I want to play with you."

He could see that Lin Yuese didn't want to play with him now, so he left unhappily.