Chapter 3317

He will be 60 years old soon. He has no energy and physical strength to start a business. The most important thing is not to make money, but to educate six children and prevent them from going astray.

Therefore, investment and financial management is the most convenient and fastest way. We can not only appreciate our assets, but also have money for the rest of our life.

Turn off the computer and take the card to check out.

Two yuan for half an hour, four yuan for two computers, 20 deposit and 16 change directly.

When I came back, I went through the vegetable market, bought watermelon, some fresh meat and wonton skin, and ate wonton in the evening.

Bai Wenli woke up from her nap and came down from upstairs. When she saw her novel on the table, she thought her mother and stepfather hadn't read it at all. She was frustrated.

When she came to her, Bai Wenli saw the red handwriting on it.

Bai Wenli was very surprised. Did her mother and stepfather really have to modify it for her?

Bai Wenli took out the novel and read it carefully one by one, especially where it was marked with a red pen. At first, she didn't think her mother and stepfather could make constructive comments, but after careful consideration, let Bai Wenli realize her shortcomings.

In some places, she felt uncomfortable when she saw them, and all of them were selected; In some places, she felt very good, especially the description of people's service and characters, which were very beautiful, but she was denied by her mother and stepfather.

She is very unconvinced!

Bai Wenbin's appreciation ability is not strong. He came down from upstairs with the manuscript and said to Bai Wenli, "second sister, can I tell the truth?"

He has read many novels before, especially martial arts novels, which are his favorite. The moves and the gratitude and resentment of the protagonist have a great sense of substitution, but the novels written by the second sister have no desire to read them, let alone a sense of substitution.

Bai Wenli rolled her eyes. "Failure is the mother of success. As readers, give me advice from the perspective of readers."

Bai Wenbin first pointed to a large paragraph of description, "I know you want to highlight the beauty of the heroine in your paragraph, but I think it's too complex to sweep it away. The later plot is a martial arts novel. It's a happy love and hatred. You write it slowly. Anyway, I'll read the first two chapters. I can't read it later and fall asleep."

Bai Wenli blushed when she heard this. "Hey, if I'm really poor at writing, three novels were rejected and several poems were rejected. I really don't have the talent for writing. Then I'll give up. I like it and can't eat it. When I go to school, I still have the qualification to be capricious, but when I graduate, I can't even support myself. Don't I want my parents to support it?"

Seeing Bai Wenli's lost appearance, Bai Jingxuan turned his wheelchair and approached Bai Wenli, "second aunt, don't lose heart. Who is born to write novels? Practice makes perfect. You can be admitted to such a good university, which proves that you have strong learning ability and sufficient knowledge reserve. Now we find out your shortcomings. If you correct them, won't you make progress?"

Bai Wenfang also encouraged her. She knew that her second sister liked novels very much. In the past, when she was at school, she could save one-third of the money for lunch every day and rent novels. Afraid of being known by parents, hide in the quilt and watch.

I used to like reading novels, but now I like writing novels. Since she likes it, she doesn't want her second sister to give up.

"Yes, second sister, don't give up easily." Bai Wenfang encouraged, "second sister, I think you write some old-fashioned. Now the times have changed and you can't write novels with old eyes."