Chapter 259

The storm in the school has gradually become a thing of the past. Bi Dongxue has become one of the two officers of the academic affairs office. A political teacher from the senior high school has served as the director of the academic affairs office. The classes brought by Wu Yongxiang and Mei Caiping are shared with the other two teachers. The storm in life is the same as the storm in the sea. No matter how big the storm comes, it will always return to calm.

Lu Yang's life has also returned to calm. He has classes, code words and rest every day. He occasionally helps Tong Yaqian revise the beginning of the romance of the Three Kingdoms of Meng Jiao's mother during working hours. It has to be said that Tong Yaqian used to be the president of the school newspaper. Her writing style is really excellent. If she wrote prose or communication reports, she never said it, but it is used in online articles, In Lu Yang's opinion, there are many shortcomings.

It can be said that online writing is very different from traditional literature. If you can write traditional literature well, nine out of ten will be blue and blue. In Lu Yang's memory, the starting point held a PK competition for the chairman of the 30 Provincial Writers' Association at the starting point. As a result, each one was disheartened. The clicks and recommendations of the whole book were not as good as the fraction of the data of the starting point gods in a day.

In Lu Yang's memory, the PK competition made him learn one word - give roses and leave fragrance in his hand.

Such book reviews often appear in the book review area under the works of the chairman of the writers' Association. The chairmen of the writers' Association still can't touch the threshold of online writing. What's more, Tong Yaqian, who was born in the school newspaper?

In Lu Yang's opinion, the text of the romance of the Three Kingdoms written by Tong Yaqian is more than beautiful, but the plot development is too slow. Lu Yang doesn't know whether female readers will like such text. He can only guide Tong Yaqian according to his own experience.

The most direct way is for Lu Yang to rent a copy of Tianya Mingyue Dao, Gu Long's masterpiece, from a bookstore near the school.

A copy of Tianya Mingyue Dao was thrown in front of Tong Yaqian and let her watch it first. Tong Yaqian may have seen a film or TV play adapted from Tianya Mingyue Dao before, but the novel of Tianya Mingyue Dao is absolutely "no!" Lu Yang delivered a clean sentence.

"How do you write that?"

"Three chapters are combined into one chapter! You can write online novels casually in the later stage, because there are a lot of words updated every day, which can not be so concise. The plot progress is slower, and the opinions of readers will not be great. However, if you write tens of thousands of words in the early stage, few people will be able to read it! What you read online articles is the plot of the story. There are a lot of people who want to read prose on the market Why should readers read your master works? Are you confident that you can write better than many masters at all times, at home and abroad? "

Tong Yaqian seemed to understand, nodded, picked up her manuscript and said, "OK! I'll write it again tonight!"

This was just one of the instructions. Two days later, in the morning, it was still working time. Tong Yaqian put the written 3000 words in front of Lu Yang and waited for Lu Yang's opinions, while her eyes always paid attention to whether the leaders appeared at the door of the office.

If you are caught doing things that have nothing to do with your work during working hours, you will be criticized.

Lu Yang is patient to read it word by word. For the authors of online articles, in fact, most people are reluctant to help newcomers read the manuscript. They don't disdain it, but it's too painful. Especially the manuscript in the form of receipt or document, it's hard to see it. If Tong Yaqian and Lu Yang don't have that kind of relationship, he can push it.

After reading more than three thousand words for more than ten minutes, Lu Yang pursed his mouth, sorted out his ideas, and then gave another bad evaluation in Tong Yaqian's expectant eyes.

"Not yet? Why?"

Tong Yaqian was a little disappointed.

But with a responsible attitude, Lu Yang still wants to tell the truth.

Avenue: "There's no big problem with the plot! But the choice of words and sentences is too serious! Another feature of online writing is popularization and colloquialism! Too serious writing will make readers very tired! Simply put, there should be sentences in your article from time to time to make readers smile. Of course, if you are a great God author, you don't have to do so, but as a nameless newcomer, it's not necessary This is particularly important! "

"How do you write it?"

Tong Yaqian frowned and was going crazy.

These days, "colloquial! Be humorous!" Lu Yang smiled and looked at Tong Yaqian trying to scratch her ears and cheeks. He thought it was very interesting.

Tong Yaqian's eyes turned a few times, and suddenly her eyebrows stretched and her mouth smiled. This expression was very abnormal. When Lu Yang was feeling strange, Tong Yaqian said, smiled and said, almost playing a rogue, and said, "don't just talk but practice! At the beginning, Lu Yang opened his mouth slightly, didn't he say it, just give you advice and help her modify it? Why did he write it for her?

"No! I don't have that much time."

After Lu Yang was stunned, he immediately refused. Recently, the war on the monthly ticket list is booming. He doesn't think he has enough time to code. Where does he have time to help Tong Yaqian write?

"You can't do it! Who told you that I can't write it? Just one chapter! Write it now! I'll help you look after the leader." at this time, there was only another female teacher in the office, and Tong Yaqian's tone was almost charming.

Lu Yang couldn't help it. He smiled bitterly and shook his head. He had to take Tong Yaqian's manuscript and rewrite the beginning plot for her. Lu Yang wrote a different story from Tong Yaqian. Tong Yaqian wrote a modern urban female college student, and then crossed to the end of the Han Dynasty, when a woman ruled the whole country.

Before crossing, Lu Yang wrote more than 1000 words, but at the beginning, Lu Yang wrote that the female college student had crossed to the imperial palace of the Han Dynasty. She was a daughter, but she was the crown prince Liu Bian who could inherit the throne. The emperor was her mother. The civil and military forces of the Manchu Dynasty were all women.