Chapter 658

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Day and night alternate and time flies.

In the twinkling of an eye, it has been more than a week since Shao Dahai's incident. There are many injustices in this world. Only time is fair! It will not slow down because you are a big man, nor let you spend your life in an instant because you are down on the street. It will not speed up the flow rate because Lu Yang has recently finished the master, so that Lu Yang can fight the new book again immediately, nor will it pass slowly because Shao Dahai is ruined and lives worse than death, so that he is always in the vortex of public opinion.

After more than a week, Lu Yang finally felt that he had enough rest and was ready to put his mind on his new book.

Before the birth of each work, it is easy to draft, at least here in Lu Yang.

The new book was tentatively named "Shishi" by him. Just now, he has changed his name to "Shishi era".

If you want to ask why, in fact, there is no big reason, but he suddenly felt that the name of Shishi era was more pleasing to the eye and felt more than Shishi.

Creation is a process that depends entirely on feeling. What every creator wants to do most in the place of creation is to write the story with the most feeling in his mind.

The content of the story is the same, as is the name of the story.

Even at the beginning of this manuscript, Lu Yang always felt unhappy today, including the introduction!

So he thought for a while and began to revise it.

Title: the era of teachers and scholars

Type: Sci Fi mecha

Author: Wen Chou

Introduction: in 8482 ad, human footprints have spread all over seven galaxies, including the Milky way. As early as the 21st century, human beings have pretended to be all kinds of aliens. Many people believe that human beings are in the lower race in the universe. If they encounter alien civilization, human civilization is likely to be fragmented and extinct.

And facts have proved that the most dangerous race in this universe, at least so far, is human!

Before the 21st century, human beings defined man eating beasts as demons and all races against human beings as demons! But what about the truth?

Humans eat everything they can! All animals and plants, whether toxic or non-toxic, harmful or harmless, are regarded as Chinese food. Every human has countless lives in his life.

Humans who eat up everything in the world early have a strong sense of crisis. They are always worried that one day they will be destroyed by alien civilization. As a result, when humans enter the interstellar era, when they really encounter one alien civilization after another, they find that all alien races are not as ferocious and expansionary as humans.

Looking at the seven galaxies, human beings are invincible!

As a result, the belligerent human regime began to split and entered the era of war once again.

The division, the top branch of arms that once swept all alien civilizations, began to be used in the civil war.

Our story begins with the battle of Longji mountain in the burning continent of the ancient strong star of the Golden Lion galaxy. This is the last battle of the nine star ace Shifeng Xingyun! His opponents are Augustus, Ronald gall, bylott and Yuanshang Zhenyi, who are also nine star ace masters

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This is probably the longest introduction to a new book written by Lu Yang in history. Why?

Still that sentence!

Feel!

He felt more comfortable writing like this, so he wrote like this.

In the manuscript written by Lu Yang before, the opening of "Shishi" was less than 100 words, which allowed the protagonist to appear. It was entirely the writing method of the mainstream online text. Lead out the protagonist as soon as possible, and explain clearly the protagonist's identity, image, skills and other things that should be explained as soon as possible, so as to let the readers enter the role as soon as possible.

But today Lu Yang wants to change the beginning.

After narrowing his eyes for more than half an hour, Lu Yang decided to write a tragic hero at the beginning - the last battle of the nine star ace Shifeng Xingyun.

It was also his peak battle.

In this war, the famous stunt of popular cloud will bloom for the last time and become a masterpiece from now on.

Lu Yang estimated that if he wrote this, the real appearance time should be that if the first two chapters are 3000 words per chapter, the appearance time of the protagonist should be written in this way, and another writer should write it. Except for the top gods at the same level as Lu Yang, even if they are written by the first-line gods, they are likely to rush into the street.

But Lu Yang feels that he doesn't have to think about so much now. He remembers that there are several great gods with stable gods in Central Plains time and space. His new book starts off on an unusual road.

But their new books are still popular, and there are still a large number of readers chasing their new books.

There is only one reason - their divine personality has become great. No matter how their new book opens, it will not lack readers to read it.

Most readers believe in their strength and have enough patience with their new books. Even if the previous chapters are very awkward, they will continue to read them, convinced that their works will become more and more wonderful.

It can be said that this wayward writing is the patent of the top God!

Some top gods may write this just to play with their personality, but most of them have only one purpose - to fully pave the way for new stories.

This is an impetuous era!

This impetuosity is very obvious in the online text industry. As mentioned above, there must be selling points that can impress readers within 3000 words in the front of the online text, even within 1000 words, or even within 300 words, which are a proof of the impetuosity of the online text industry.

In the Internet era, although there are many readers, there are countless works that readers can choose. It is impossible for any reader to read all the books in a website library. Hundreds of thousands of authors write continuously every day, and the number of words updated every day is far more than any reader can read every day.

As a result, most readers are impatient with new books. If they don't see what attracts them at the beginning of a few minutes, they will immediately abandon the book and turn to other works.

In such an environment, more than 90% of the authors are forced to get the story to the point as soon as possible, so that the law that the first few hundred words will move the readers is gradually formed.

Such a law never exists in traditional literary works, which is probably one of the reasons why traditional scholars despise online literature.

However, from the perspective of the structure of the story, in fact, at the beginning of the beginning, there are enough slow and hot articles to pave the way, so it is easier to produce high-quality products!

Because there is enough bedding, the later plot is easier to form tension!

What is story tension?

Use a popular example to describe it!

Cats eat fish, dogs eat meat, and Altman beats little monsters. Should they be very happy for cats, dogs and Altman? This happiness can be compared to the mainstream fast-paced Internet.

So, how can the works of slow heat be compared?

A group of cats are eating carrots. Only one cat can eat fish every day; A group of dogs are eating vegetables, only one dog has meat to eat; The rest of the Altman family can only be three good students safely. Only one Altman can beat small monsters every three or five times.

There is a contrast, will appear happier ah!

This is part of the story tension!

The fast-paced shuangwen, in short, is just for the sake of Shuang and Shuang, constantly pursuing one shuangwen plot after another, while the slow heat works, because of a large number of bedding plots, at first glance, don't seem very cool, but if you taste carefully and have patience, you will find that this feeling of shuangwen is not bad at all. Even when the plot breaks out in the middle and later stages, it is so cool that people can't restrain themselves, I want to dance.

Lu Yang intends to use this technique to write this time. It should be said that he has two purposes.

First, nature is to pave the way for the later plot and make the story more exciting.

The second is to test the extent of his current divine personality and how many readers will be patient to follow up his new book.

Every writer, in addition to earning more royalties, wants to prove his ability and value.

And how to prove your ability and value?

Royalties are only one aspect, the most important is the recognition of fans!

A boring codeword career will not be so boring if it is accompanied and cheered.

It can be said that this attempt is Lu Yang's caprice.

In order to make the story more wonderful and to test your God.

At the beginning of the originally written manuscript, he moved it to the back and wrote it again

This chapter is very sad written by Lu Yang. It is not written in the shallow representation of the net text.

The writing method of shallow representation is defined by Lu Yang himself.

He looked at most of the online articles and found that most of them paid too much attention to the promotion of the plot and gave up a lot of detail description and the rendering of the overall atmosphere.

Often simply explain the place and time, describe the surrounding scenery in a few words, and then enter the plot. Obviously, it should be a very sad plot, because the atmosphere is not enough. When the author writes, he takes it in one stroke, and when the reader reads it, he doesn't feel much sad.

Lu Yang wrote the first two chapters as a student, no! It is far beyond the state when he wrote his composition as a student. He spent more than half an hour, half narrowing his eyes, and asked himself to substitute himself into the scene he conceived. He carefully carved every detail of the story in his heart, especially because of personal gratitude and resentment. The superior commander trapped his nine star ace teacher into the sadness surrounded by four nine star ace teachers.

He deeply substituted himself into the role of popular cloud, and imagined in his mind that he had bravely killed the enemy hundreds of times, but the superior commander ignored his merit, had an affair with the enemy, and plunged him into all the details of heavy encirclement.

If you want readers to feel the same and feel the same sadness and anger as the popular cloud, only you, as the author, have that feeling first!

With this idea, Lu Yang spent the whole afternoon just like an actor who had been involved in the play too deeply. He couldn't get out of the play for a long time and was still immersed in the popular mood. Chinese mobile phone, official account, official account, etc., the official account of WeChat website (WeChat adds friends, add public numbers - input qdread), join in immediately! Everyone has a prize, now pay attention to WeChat WeChat public address!