Chapter 669

While waiting for the readers' book review, Lu Yang thought carefully about the contents of the first two chapters of his new book and thought for a while. It is estimated that the fast-moving readers may have finished reading these two chapters. Lu Yang suddenly decided to send another chapter.

However, the first two chapters will inevitably make most readers mistakenly think that the hero of this book is popular cloud. The death of popular cloud will probably be mistakenly thought that he wants to reincarnate and rebirth, and mistakenly mistake the era of teachers and scholars as a work of rebirth.

With a decision in mind, Lu Yang didn't go to the book review area. Whether there was a Book Review came out and immediately passed another chapter on.

In Lu Yang's setting of the era of teachers and scholars, the hero was originally a cynical high school student with good family Kung Fu, but he did nothing all day and had no goal in life. He usually took pleasure in finding someone to fight and soak girls.

At that moment, the popular rain was like being beaten in the head. The whole person's ears were singing together, and no one could be heard for a moment.

His brother's popularity is his pride and his only relative.

His martial arts were taught by his brother. When his brother was there, he always rebelled against his brother. His brother gave him a good life, but he also lost his motivation to make progress. Now his brother is gone.

Popular rain is the protagonist of this book set by Lu Yang.

Everyone thinks that the two brothers of the Feng family, the popular cloud, are the best. However, no one knows that the most gifted is the popular rain. Since his birth, he has been far ahead of his brother's popular cloud in terms of memory, analytical ability and martial arts.

In this world, genius is always different from ordinary people.

The talent of popular rain makes him learn everything very fast. The consequence of being too fast is that it is very easy for him to do everything he wants. Coupled with his carefree life, he feels that life is boring and can't find anything he is interested in. Over time, he develops a cynical character.

In Lu Yang's setting, the popular rain changed his cynical character overnight because of his brother's death.

He wanted to see his brother again, so he went deep into the machine armor game of "six ways". According to the military practice, the souls of military experts who died in the war were included in "six ways". People who were destined to meet the souls of military experts in "six ways".

These souls, like living people, will always live in the six ways. They will teach people all kinds of machine armor combat skills. The popular rain goes deep into the six ways all the way. They see the souls of one military expert after another, learn one kind of combat skills, defeat one master after another, and finally sweep the whole six ways, but they never see their brother in it.

Until one day, a subordinate of his brother found him and personally told him that the real reason for his brother's death was that the virtual machine armor combat technology was invincible to the popularity of "six ways". In the coming college entrance examination, he was admitted to the military teachers' college with high scores to learn the real machine armor control technology.

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There are many ways to make a story attractive.

The lowest way should be Xiaohuang's writing, which attracts readers through paragraph after paragraph of love and color description. This practice can always attract many readers, but such writing will never be on the table. The people who write are ashamed to tell others, the people who read, and the friends and relatives around them.

With Lu Yang's current reputation, it is naturally impossible to adopt this method.

A more advanced approach can create one or two characters that readers like through characterization, attract readers through one refreshing story plot after another, and make readers like through humorous and funny writing.

In Lu Yang's opinion, the best way is to impress the readers on the intention of the article.

Specifically, it should be the grasp of gratitude and resentment.

In Lu Yang's view, all stories can't have any subject matter or type, whether they are fantasy, immortal Xia, city, history, science fiction and supernatural. The core of all these stories is not all kinds of novel settings, magnificent pictures in books, or characters of bookworms.

The above is just the shell of a book.

For thousands of years, it has been said that a good article must contain Tao in writing.

In Lu Yang's opinion, this is bullshit!

It should be great works of thought, textbooks and novels. From the day of its birth, there is only one core - story!

Wonderful and good-looking stories are what all novels should pursue.

The content and form of the novel can have countless faces, but what runs through it must be the common feelings of mankind, such as gratitude, hatred, greed, anger and infatuation.

Only when these emotional lines are properly arranged can the readers completely stand on the side of the protagonist, replace the protagonist's role ideologically, and share happiness and sorrow with the protagonist.

If all kinds of emotional lines are not arranged properly, the story can not be really wonderful.

For example, it is also the protagonist who kills people. Some books make readers bored. They feel that the protagonist kills innocent people indiscriminately, just like a reckless man. In smart works, the protagonist kills people, killing readers happily and vividly. I wish I could replace it with my own body.

At the beginning of the era of teachers and scholars, what Lu Yang tries to do is to make readers recognize and look forward to the next powerful and revenge action of the popular rain.

Only when this point stands, all the plots behind will be what readers expect.

This, in Lu Yang's view, is similar to the flow of demobilization.

When the flow of quitting marriage just came out, the reason why it was popular and made readers deeply like the book was that the plot of quitting marriage at the beginning made readers recognize and look forward to the outbreak behind the protagonist.

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Because he spent the most effort on the opening of each book. For this beginning, Lu Yang changed his manuscript several times, didn't take the ordinary road, and finally got such a satisfactory opening.

In this book, he did not learn from any online text in his memory.

After sending this chapter, Lu Yang did not continue to sit in front of the computer waiting for the book review. His worry about gain and loss has calmed down.

Every author who has confidence in himself must have confidence in his work before a new book is published. If he is not confident enough, it means that he does not recognize the quality of his work.

If you don't recognize it, how many people can you expect to recognize it?

After turning off the computer, Lu Yangxiang smiled and came down from downstairs relaxed. When he Baiming, the housekeeper and bodyguard who had not slept downstairs, heard the news, they all came out of their rooms. Lu Yang smiled and waved to them and said, "don't worry about me! I'll go out alone! Have a rest!"

The housekeeper and he Baiming stopped this time.

The night outside was hazy and the sky was full of stars. Lu Yang came out of the villa. A cool wind with water vapor blew in front of him. The whole person was suddenly clear.

Lu Yang didn't drive and didn't plan to go far. He wandered freely in the villa area on the island. He has been reborn for several years. He still likes the night. Every time he walks under the night sky, on the unmanned Road, and smells the smell of grass, trees and soil on the roadside, his mind will be very relaxed.

The city is too noisy during the day. There are pedestrians and vehicles everywhere. There is noise everywhere. Only at night can it be quiet.

The hazy night, the stars in the sky, the faint smell of vegetation and soil can make his mind clear. Although he feels a little lonely, his mind is particularly clear. No matter what he thinks, he can read like a bead.

Lu Yang walked aimlessly in the dark shade of the street lights. He suddenly heard a lot of voices not far away. He walked subconsciously. His first thought was to change direction and don't continue to move forward, but hesitated for a while, but he still walked forward slowly.

Maybe subconsciously, he also likes excitement! People are always contradictory.

Not far ahead, after turning a corner, Lu Yang saw a sports field in front of him.

There are two sides of steel wire mesh around the playground, and the other two sides are fences made of green bamboo. Green bamboo is planted on the ground and shakes with the wind. On the playground, some people are playing basketball, some are playing badminton, and others sit together in twos and threes. There are some facilities for children to play in the southeast corner. There are more than a dozen adults and children playing together.

Slide, swing, seesaw

There was laughter.

Looking around, there are basically children, girls and women.

Men mostly play basketball in the other corner, and several couples are playing badminton.

It's not far from Lu Yang's villa. He rarely comes here on weekdays, but he knows for the first time that it will be so lively in the evening. The lights on the playground are bright and there is soothing music.

Seeing such a happy scene, Lu Yang was envious and smiled. He walked into it and sat down in an empty corner. There was a bench for people to rest.

Suddenly, Lu Yang heard the laughter of a little girl who was familiar with her. His eyes followed the prestige. He saw that the neighbor's little girl just slipped down the slide with several children. The little guy's laughter spread very far, so that people could infect her happiness at the moment.

Nannan is over there, so must sister Yu, the neighbor.

Lu Yang looked around among the adults nearby. Sure enough, he saw sister Yu. To Lu Yang's surprise, there was a familiar figure around sister Yu.

A black tunic dress, a pair of high-heeled sandals, shawl and black hair, and a pair of exquisite black framed glasses on the bridge of the nose.

It was Fenglan that had not been seen for a long time.

Why is she with sister Yu?

Lu Yang has some doubts.