"Little D, give me the script first."
He Tiantian didn't hurry to ask little D about the new task.
After the just concluded rescue mission, he Tiantian found that there is still a certain distance between the stories he heard from others and what he saw and experienced.
Just like in the last world, if you don't actually enter the novel world, it's hard for he Tiantian to find the reason for the failure of her former writer by relying on the introduction of little D.
The script may not be as intuitive as personal experience, but if you study it carefully, you can still find some clues.
"OK!"
Little D doesn't know what he Tiantian thinks. He readily agrees to transmit the original script and the scripts written by the first two writers to he Tiantian in turn.
He Tiantian accepted the original script first——
Well, how to say, this is a very wonderful ancient Chinese farming text.
No crossing, no rebirth, very orthodox ancient romantic novels.
There are farming, business, power and palace fighting.
The key is that the author's writing is very good, and the frame structure, character setting and detail description of the novel world are all in place.
Obviously, there is no crossing plot, which makes people read, but there is still a sense of substitution.
Because she portrays the characters in a very three-dimensional, full and vivid way. The protagonists, supporting actors and even some small roles that do not appear in front and only exist in other populations are also impressive.
Not a pale piece of paper, no Facebook.
And the people of some important people have not collapsed from beginning to end.
The plot does not collapse, and the perfect human design does not collapse. It makes people feel hearty and dripping when they read it.
It is reasonable to say that such a novel, which is enough to be called a high-quality novel, should not need to be modified by the writer.
However, he Tiantian read it carefully again and finally found a small problem.
"This little plot can't be said to be poorly written, but the overall standard of the book seems to be a little worse."
He Tiantian has done more than a dozen tasks and written more than a dozen novels, which has been separated from the level of newcomers and rookies.
She has experience, and she has become smarter and sharper.
Therefore, she soon found an uncomfortable place in this exquisite ancient saying farming text.
"Gu xiuniang! The man's adoptive mother is not quite right!"
He Tiantian's eyes fell on a villain with only one or two appearances.
He Tiantian didn't ask in a hurry, but kept the idea in mind and continued to read the script rewritten by the first writer.
Although the writer failed, she was very keen and found the problem of Gu xiuniang's human design.
According to the characters in the script, Gu xiuniang is a vicious villain who values boys over girls and acts recklessly.
After she married her husband, she didn't have children for several years.
The mother-in-law's family didn't force it. Both her mother-in-law and her husband said to let it go.
Gu xiuniang herself was worried. In order to have a child, to be exact, to have a son, she was a little possessed.
She used all kinds of birth prescriptions, whether reliable or not.
After tossing for several years, her mother-in-law couldn't see it and wanted to beat her. As a result, at this time, Gu xiuniang was pregnant.
This was originally a good thing, but Gu xiuniang was too good at it.
When I was seven or eight months pregnant, I always felt that my pregnancy was not very good. I looked like a daughter anyway.
Gu xiuniang dreamed of winning a man with one stroke. After she suspected that the child in her stomach was a daughter, she was a little crazy.
She had a whimsical idea to "steal a dragon and turn a phoenix".
Quietly ask people to inquire around to see who has pregnant women giving birth at the same time.
She gave up a lot of money and really bought several pregnant women.
Gu xiuniang's plan is absurd and crazy: after her own production, if she has a son, it's all right.
If it is a daughter, and there is only one son among those pregnant women, she will exchange the two children!
Her calculation was stupid, and she was soon noticed by her shrewd mother-in-law.
Coincidentally, Mrs. Hou, who was served by her mother-in-law, was about to give birth, and happened to have some accidents at this time. Her mother-in-law had an idea and came up with a "plan".
Soon after, Gu xiuniang, Mrs. Hou and those women gave birth to children one after another.
Gu xiuniang indeed gave birth to a daughter, while Mrs. Hou gave birth to a son.
Two of those women also had sons.
Gu xiuniang's mother-in-law secretly took the newborn baby girl to exchange with one of them at Gu xiuniang's instruction.
Her mother-in-law took the opportunity to step in and replaced Mrs. Hou's son with Gu xiuniang.
And this son, of course, is the man.
Gu xiuniang became the adoptive mother of the man.
Gu xiuniang herself did not know that she was satisfied and raised the man as a sweetheart.
But Gu xiuniang's daughter became the daughter of Hou's house.
However, a few years later, something happened to Hou's house, which was copied and sold.
Although Gu xiuniang's mother-in-law is on duty in Hou's house, her man is a good citizen, and with the support of Hou's house, she has a slight low yield.
Hou's house was defeated and backward. Gu xiuniang's man quickly redeemed my mother.
But the old woman was a loyal servant. She cared for the old owner, asked her son to redeem Mrs. Hou's mother and daughter, and bought a small courtyard for placement.
Later, the Marquis was wronged, and the Marquis house regained its glory.
But in that accident, the Marquis was injured and could not bear any more.
Such a big Marquis house can't be without heirs.
At this time, the male master was twelve or thirteen years old. He was progressive in reading and seemed to be a famous young talent around him.
Gu xiuniang's mother-in-law took the initiative to expose her daughter-in-law, saying that her daughter-in-law was bold and stole a dragon and turned a Phoenix, confusing the blood of the Hou house because of her own self-interest.
Once such anecdotes were exposed, they immediately attracted a lot of attention.
Finally, of course, everyone should return. Gu xiuniang's selfish and bold vicious dragon trap has also come to its due end.
Although this plot is about the man, it does not account for a large proportion in the full text.
For a TV play, it is estimated that it is the plot of the first two episodes.
After all, the most wonderful part of this article is the plots after the man grew up.
Love line, career line, revenge and exploring more secrets are the focus of the novel.
The reason why the author created Gu xiuniang as a perfect adoptive mother is not without reasons:
First, it is to make the male owners of rich families and dignitaries have reason to become childhood sweethearts with the female owners of civilian origin.
Second, in order to highlight the man's personal charm, the bamboo shoots well and leaves mud without being dyed. Even if he was raised by a top-notch child, he can still become a beautiful, kind and upright person.
Third, it's even simpler. Such a complex life experience is in line with the identity of the male Lord and can make the plot more tortuous.
The author portrays the characters very vividly, and the readers hate to gnash their teeth when they read Gu xiuniang.
However, if you read through carefully, you will feel awkward.
Gu xiuniang is so excellent, and the male owner was raised by her, although she was only twelve or thirteen years old.
However, at this age, people can basically be qualitative.
Gu xiuniang's character is poor, but she has raised an excellent son. Of course, this is to show that the man himself is good enough.
However, the influence of the original family and the words and deeds of parents are really important.
The man is still perfect, more or less fake.
In addition, after Gu xiuniang's scandal of "changing her son" was exposed, the male owner was shocked and heartbroken. Although he begged Gu xiuniang for affection, he finally made the choice of helping her or not.
The author wants to highlight the male owner's calm and reason, as well as his adherence to the three outlooks and the bottom line.
However, there are still a small number of readers who think that the male Lord is too ruthless. Gu xiuniang is shameless, but she is really good to the male Lord. It's not too much to dig your heart and lungs.
And Gu xiuniang didn't want to change the young master of Hou's house. The pregnant women she found were all born in poverty.
It is Gu xiuniang's mother-in-law and his real mother, Mrs. Hou, who really let Hou, the favored son of God, grow up in a small family and do not enjoy the glory and wealth that should belong to him.
After all, no matter how vicious Gu xiuniang is, she is only the daughter-in-law of the servant's house. If she is not summoned at ordinary times, she can't even enter the gate of the Marquis house.
It's impossible for her to steal the son of the marquis.
After the man was replaced by Gu xiuniang, Gu xiuniang regarded him as the lifeblood.
Dig out your heart and lungs and give everything!
Therefore, people all over the world can accuse and spit on Gu xiuniang, but only male owners can't.
The one who is really poor and qualified to resent Gu xiuniang is the "fake daughter", Wei yuanniang, Gu xiuniang's own daughter.
Wei yuanniang didn't want to be the fake daughter of the marquis.
Later, her life experience was exposed. She became the granddaughter of a servant woman from the legitimate daughter of a noble marquis. Finally, she was married to a foreign country and died miserably.
How innocent is she?
Even if she was transferred to Hou's house and became the so-called daughter, she only lived a few years of wealth.
Later, Hou's house fell guilty. She suffered all kinds of hardships with Mrs. Hou and ruined her face because she saved Mrs. Hou.
It was not easy to endure until the Marquis was wronged. She became the "civet cat" of "civet cat for Prince"!
He Tiantian:
"Alas, Wei yuanniang is really miserable. No wonder readers sympathize and complain!"
Originally a very good work, it was complained by readers because of this small plot. Dianniang library had to send writers to modify it.
So there was the first writer.
The target she crossed was naturally Wei yuanniang.
After crossing, Wei yuanniang was familiar with the plot, so she began to attack in the face.
The process was great, that is, the main framework of the plot was messed up, and the male owners were almost destroyed.
Men and women are the pillars of maintaining the novel world. If there is something wrong with men, the whole small world is in danger of collapse.
So the first writer failed.
Then there was a second writer.
This learned from his predecessor's lesson and did not kill the four sides, but opened the mode of cooperation with men.
She was kind and gentle. She also used the goods purchased in dianniang mall to help the original owner repair his face, and then——
Well, no, then.
The novel world suddenly issued a warning of the danger of collapse!
The second writer directly deceived: she did not oppose the male and female owners, nor changed the main plot. How could she endanger the whole small world?!
It's so wronged. You have wood!
"... without Tian Tian's experience in the last world, the system doesn't know yet."
"It is because of your discovery that the system has guessed: about that Wei yuanniang has also awakened!"
Little D is talking in he Tiantian's ear.
"Dianniang's library has not encountered the role of awakening, but most of them are male or female masters, and even important supporting roles."
And Wei yuanniang, not to mention one woman and two women, she can't even be a woman.
At best, it's a dragon suit with a name.
Her awakening can actually affect the stability of the whole novel world, even the system did not expect.
"Aside from this plot, in fact, this novel is still very good. The system doesn't want such a good work to be taken off the shelf, so I want to save it again!"
"Of course, because this task is difficult, the points are very considerable. In addition, the writer has a certain degree of autonomy -"
Little D continued to introduce.
He Tiantian nodded slowly, "I see! Is there no clear task this time? As long as you can keep the novel world?"
"That's right! Tiantian, this mission is really more troublesome than the last one, because the awakened Wei yuanniang has blackened -"
Little D shook his small round body and said slowly.
"You just said that this mission has strong autonomy?" he Tiantian suddenly asked.
"Yes! Because it is difficult, and it has failed twice, the system will not be too rigid. As long as the stability of the small world can be ensured and the work can be put on the shelves again, the writers can play freely!"
Little D answered obediently.
"Can I change the role of crossing?"
"Ha? The role of crossing?"
"Yes, classmate D, don't forget, I'm a 'villain professional', and Wei yuanniang is not a villain. At most, she's a poor cannon fodder." he Tiantian smiled at the bottom of her eyes.
Little D is a little silly. Why does Tian Tian take the initiative to be a villain again.
Of course, little D is not what he was.
After a little thought, it responded, "sweet, don't you want to cross into Gu xiuniang? Do you want to advance the crossing node before changing the child?"
"No, no, the plot of 'changing children' must exist, otherwise the whole plot will collapse."
How did the "crown prince" grow up in the folk without "civet cat for crown prince"?
How did he grow up with his mistress and love each other?!
In addition, some subsequent plots will also be affected.
And xiuniang's mother-in-law made great contributions to the "exchange of children", and later exposed her daughter-in-law.
She is the spokesman of "loyal servant"!
If there is no "exchange", what does the "loyal servant" use to show his loyalty?!
Little D was a little worried and shouted.
"Crossing the node can be carried out normally without advance. I just want to cross into Gu xiuniang!"
He Tiantian glances at the hairy little D classmate. Hum, he knows that "autonomy" is a lie.
Of course, he Tiantian also understands.
If we could change the main plot at will, the world of the novel would have collapsed and there was no need for the writer to rescue it.