Chapter 881

Imperial concubine Li was surprised by the imperial concubine's request. She asked, "what is the subject matter?"

Yao Jieyu also looked at the imperial concubine curiously.

Xiao Cuixi: "it's probably about the story of the protagonist going to sea by boat and traveling around."

Princess Li frowned, "what can I see in this story?"

Xiao Cuixi: "there are many things to see.

For example, you can set the protagonist as a poor bastard oppressed by the family.

He was driven out of his house by his brother and had nowhere to go,.

At this time, you'd better focus on describing the hatefulness of your direct brother, so that readers hate him and want to put their hands into the book and strangle him.

Remember, hatred is an important way to stimulate a sense of identity.

As long as you can make the reader empathize with the protagonist, your story is half successful. "

Princess Li showed an educated look and asked, "then?"

Xiao Xi continued.

"Then you let the fallen protagonist join the caravan and go all the way south to a seaside town.

It is better to use real place names, which will help to increase the sense of substitution of readers.

The protagonist happened to save a drunkard here. When the drunkard woke up, he knew that he was actually a captain.

The captain invited the protagonist to join the fleet and set sail.

Until then, the protagonist knew that there were many countries on the other side of the sea.

Those countries have many rare spices, exquisite handicrafts and different cultures.

The people who live there are very tall and have high noses and deep eyes, which are completely different from those on our side.

They have blond hair, brown hair and red or black hair.

Their eyes also have many colors, such as blue, green and gray.

Some of them like to eat fish and shrimp raw, some like to cut beef into large pieces and fry them in oil, and others like to put vegetables into bread as rice.

What is bread? It's the steamed bread here.

Back to the point.

The protagonist and his party deal with these foreigners.

They sell their own goods at a price dozens of times higher than the market, and then buy all kinds of spices, food materials and handicrafts from the local at a very low price.

After that, they shipped these goods back to China, and the selling price suddenly doubled more than ten times, with frighteningly high profits.

A boat of people made a lot of money. Even the protagonist who joined the fun also made a lot of money.

After the protagonist tasted the sweetness, he immediately used the money to buy a batch of goods and officially joined the navigation team.

In this way, he quickly accumulated wealth and married the captain's only daughter.

Later, the protagonist inherited the captain's fleet and expanded the fleet. Finally, he became the most powerful navigator on the sea and saved his wealth.

After learning that the protagonist was developed, those relatives and friends who despised him came to him, and even his first brother, who had driven him out of the house, wanted to clear up his grievances with him.

It depends on how you develop at this time?

You can write that they make up and finally kiss the Meimei family.

You can also write that the protagonist not only remained unmoved, but also severely hit the snobbish faces, so that they deeply realized what it is called 30 years east and 30 years West. Don't deceive the young people into being poor! "

Princess Li blurted out without thinking: "that must be to beat those snobs in the face! At the beginning, they ignored me, and today I'm going to make them stand up!"

Xiao Xi drank a mouthful of Iced Milk Tea and moistened her throat.

"What is your life, you has the final say," you write the story.

Concubine Li thought carefully and hesitated: "but I have never written a male as the protagonist. All the stories I have written before take women as the first protagonist. I'm afraid I can't write this male protagonist."

Xiao Xi suggested.

"You can try to write first.

If you can't write a good male perspective, replace the male with the female.

The main plot remains unchanged. Just modify the beginning plot a little.

For example, the female owner's family has been doing business for generations.

But because the woman's father accidentally offended the local tyrants, he was killed alive.

All the property in the family was taken away, and the elder brother of the woman was disabled.

Seeing her family wither and her mother wash her face with tears all day, the woman decided to give it a go.

She disguised herself as a man and joined the caravan all the way south, hoping to win a glimmer of hope for her family in the south.

By coincidence, the hostess happened to help the captain and was invited by the captain to sail together.

When the woman found a business opportunity at sea, she wrote to her family and asked them to go south together.

The family work together to build a business, buy merchant ships, expand the fleet, constantly travel to and from the sea, earn a lot of wealth, and finally lead the family to the peak of life! "

Yao Jieyu was fascinated.

At this time, she couldn't help clapping her hands: "I like this story!"

Princess Li asked, "what about the powerful villains who killed the daughter's father before?"

Xiao Xi gave her a move.

"You can make the lady's family an imperial merchant.

When the female Lord came to Beijing to offer tribute on behalf of her family, she took the opportunity to sue the emperor and ask the emperor to make a decision for her father.

The emperor ordered people to thoroughly investigate the case and learned that the facts were indeed as the hostess said. When the powerful villains were arrested, they paid for the hostess's father's life.

The mistress's great revenge has been avenged, and the family business has gone to a higher level. "

When Princess Li heard the ending, she immediately felt that the evil spirit in her heart came out, and the whole person was comfortable.

Yao Jieyu couldn't help asking, "why is it all the story of the female owner's career? Didn't the female owner get married? Who did she marry at last? She should be very good-looking. Won't the emperor want to bring her into the harem when he sees her?"

Imperial concubine Li looked at her with a disgusting look: "isn't it fragrant to engage in business? Why do you have to enter the palace? What's good about entering the palace? Even if the female leader is lucky to be favored, in case he meets a temperament like us... Cough."

She just swallowed the word "uncertainty".

She glanced at the imperial concubine secretly and saw that the imperial concubine didn't care. Then she dared to go on.

"If the female Lord meets an emperor who doesn't look at her at all, how will she live in the future? How miserable it is to be a living widow."

Yao Jieyu thought so. Once she entered the palace gate, it was as deep as the sea. It was more comfortable to be carefree outside.

She urged: "Sister Li Fei, go back and write this story. I really want to see it."

To be honest, Princess Li's hands are itchy.

Her mind is full of stories about the female Lord Jedi fighting back against the villains in revitalizing the family, and she wants to write all the stories in her mind now.

Xiao Xi said, "don't worry, the palace hasn't finished yet."

Li Fei and Yao Jieyu both looked at her.