(Author) New cover and help.

Alice.

it has been a long time since I made one of these.

As the title says, I am working on a new cover. It's going to be more moe! I will post a super rough potato sketch on this post.

Anyways, what do I mean by help? I am just looking for feedback regarding the story, to be honest. What you like, what you dislike. Do characters feel fake? Etc. I am always trying to improve so some more feedback from multiple people is nice. I have gotten feedback from a few people but I think the more the better. So there is that. This author of yours has been working really hard to improve writing and the story in general. Hopefully, it has been noticeable. If it hasn't well... I hope it eventually is. 

Here is the cover sketch. I would certainly like to know everyone's thoughts.