The response in the previous chapter was a bit too big.
Let me talk about the original intention of this story. Then ask for opinions.
Everyone should be able to see that this book is based on the Marvel One-two-Three, and uses the stories of various Hollywood movies to advance. By the way fill the plot time.
This part of Tekken has been lying in my outline, and what I wanted to write was Alvin's interaction with Matt and Danny.
Among them, Joey's length is not small, her "betrayed" brother Ward finally died in Danny's hands. The woman began to change from "good" to "evil".
Then it was Matt's turn that became less paranoid.
Then there is the school's unexpected "harvest" in this story!
This part has little to do with the main line, it can be regarded as a side story.
I just want to ask, 1: Reduce the plot and reduce Joey's playing time.
2: Keep the plot I said above and let it show up in the book.
This has nothing to do with the tone of the book. Alvin's personality has never changed, and the tone of the book has not changed.
It is also an interaction between me and everyone. Book friends decide the direction of this plot.
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I am a cute new writer, an old bookworm, but I cannot represent everyone's taste.
Everyone said that I have written to such a degree, and sometimes I am a little confused.
I don't seem to know what kind of plot will make most people like it.
I have subscribed to hundreds of books myself, but almost none of them have caught me up because the plot is repeating. I don't really want to go this way, I would rather keep the content down.
The only thing I want is to show a story about many interesting characters in the context of Marvel.
I realized that the scale of the previous chapter was not well grasped. I am not a great god. Sometimes it is really difficult to explain everything and make everyone agree!
Let's talk about it!
Anyway, I have already seen it here, and I should have feelings for Alvin.
What are the flaws, forgive me!
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