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Since the writing collapse, Melody has been thinking about where Melody failed.

In the beginning, Melody's "Fighting Beasts" was not bad. Every issue was recommended in the top three, and the follow-up reading was okay, and it could completely hit 1,000 subscriptions.

So, when did the writing bias and the writing collapse start? !

The melody has been thinking hard for a long time. It turned out that it has been wrong since it was put on the shelves. Since entering the university, it has deviated from the main line of Yu Beast Wen.

Looking back, since entering the university, the life of the protagonist, Mu Xuan, has strayed from reality and has become illusory, unable to be substituted by readers, and the protagonist who cannot be substituted by readers is naturally abandoned by book friends...

What is the root cause? It turned out to be the plot outline of the melody design!

Therefore, in the next book, a detailed plot outline must be designed.

In addition, Melody also found that she made a big mistake, that is, the protagonist has too many beasts, and the increase is too fast. Once there are too many beasts, the book friends will naturally look dazzled and completely unable to arouse the emotions of the readers.

Therefore, in the novels about beasts, there must not be too many beasts, they must be limited, and the number of beasts must be increased gradually. The increase of each beast must be eye-catching.

The third point is that the description of the villain is too facial, and the IQ is too low, even giving the protagonist a head.

Therefore, we must design the villain carefully. Here, we strongly recommend Amon, the number one villain of the squid "Master of Mysteries". Even after several years have passed, the villain of Amon is still in my heart. Of course, Ananda, the great villain of "Honor of the World", which I love, is also deeply remembered.

As for the plot after leaving Blue Star, Melody had completely let go of herself at that time. Whatever she wanted to write, in the end, she still didn't have a plot outline.

To sum up here, the shortcomings of the beasts are fully exposed: lack of a complete plot outline, insufficient portrayal of the protagonist, wrong understanding of the cool points of the beasts, and the design of the villain and supporting characters is not good enough, and so on.

Next book, try to solve all the above problems, so be it.