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i am a new author and plan on making a better book later
and i would love informative feedback so that i can make it better when i start doing this seriously please and thank you
also, I forgot to include the different element mastery in the world in the world
and they're subcategories (sub cat for short)
air
higher air (sub cat)
mid-air (sub cat)
lower air (sub cat)
fire
higher fire (sub cat)
mid fire(sub cat)
lower fire(sub cat)
earth
higher earth (sub cat)
mid earth (sub cat)
lower earth (sub cat)
water
higher water (sub cat)
mid water (sub cat)
lower water(sub cat)@@