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Name:glory seeker Author:blankkarma
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i am a new author and plan on making a better book later

and i would love informative feedback so that i can make it better when i start doing this seriously please and thank you

also, I forgot to include the different element mastery in the world in the world

and they're subcategories (sub cat for short)

air

higher air (sub cat)

mid-air (sub cat)

lower air (sub cat)

fire

higher fire (sub cat)

mid fire(sub cat)

lower fire(sub cat)

earth

higher earth (sub cat)

mid earth (sub cat)

lower earth (sub cat)

water

higher water (sub cat)

mid water (sub cat)

lower water(sub cat)@@