Chapter 21: Future Chapter Teaser!! Need Opinion! Constructive Criticism, Please!!!

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Chapter 21: Future Chapter Teaser!! Need Opinion! Constructive Criticism, Please!!!

Here's the teaser of what I'm writing: As you may know, the majority voted for a harem, so my aim is to make it as genuine as possiblenothing stupid, forced, or unbelievable. Perhaps it isn't so far-fetched, considering it's set in an apocalypse.

Anyways, without further ado, here's the teaser! I'd love to hear your thoughts from both a logical standpoint and a personal one. Here it is!

(Note: Keep in mind this isn't the finished product and some context is left out. Also it possesses some insight to his past.)

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Over time, this could have influenced his own emotional responses, causing him to experience, to some extent, the feelings of consideration that were once dormant.

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Anyways, that's the end. Now, please share your thoughts from both a logical and personal standpoint. I'm seeking productive criticism to make this harem genuine.

Also, if you're worried about Nagi's personality changing to a white knight or the like, rest assured! Nagi will stay true to his personality, with the only changes being emotional growth-wise.