Chapter 1064： Found another hidden danger

After sighing, Yang Qiming came to Libo's office again.

"Lao Li, how does this chapter feel?" Yang Qiming asked.

Li Bo nodded and said: "Yes, very good. Even Genghis Khan appeared. Gu Yong did dare to think and write, and he had enough pen ability. Before that, I was worried that he would collapse later, but I read Chapter 3. After that, my worries decreased."

Yang Qiming heard Li Bo say this, his face was quite proud, and his previous feeling was indeed correct.

I was about to say something, but I heard Li Bo continue to say: "However, I found another problem."

"Another question?" Yang Qiming glanced at Li Bo suspiciously, and said, "What is the problem? Lao Li, come and listen."

Li Bo said: "This work is a martial arts work, but from the first three chapters, the martial arts elements seem to be less. Apart from the description of Qiu Chuji and the Jiangnan Seven Monsters, there are not many martial arts elements.

This third chapter is almost all, about the description of the war between the Mongolian tribes, as well as the conflicts between the Temujin tribe and the envoys of the Golden Kingdom, there are few martial arts elements.

Moreover, the protagonist Guo Jing seems to be growing up in Temuzhen's army. So, what he has come into contact with and learned should mainly be the set of marching battles in the desert, and it seems that there is no martial arts element.

Of course, I'm not saying that writing like this is not good. In fact, with Gu Yong's pen power, writing like this is bound to be very exciting.

But this is a martial arts novel after all, and the martial arts element is the most important. Otherwise, it is more like a historical novel. "

After listening to Li Bo finished, Yang Qiming nodded, did not refute, but smiled: "I said Lao Li, you will pick a problem. Looking at the first three chapters, this is indeed a problem. However, this is the only thing. The third chapter is only, don’t worry, I believe this will be a genuine martial arts novel."

Li Bo also smiled and said: "I didn't mean to pick faults, but our requirements must be strict. You are right. This is only Chapter 3, and I hope to be able to do what you said next."

Yang Qiming nodded and said: "Then a few days later, look at the situation in Chapter 4. To be honest, I am looking forward to it. I like this work more and more."

Li Bo said again: "To be honest, I also have some expectations. I also like this work a bit now."

"Oh, isn't it?" Yang Qiming laughed, and then went out, feeling very good.

After Yang Qiming went out, Li Bo smiled and shook his head. He seemed to be in a good mood.

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Judging from the first three chapters of "The Legend of the Condor Heroes", its martial arts elements do seem to be a little bit small, especially from the third chapter and the development trend of the latter part derived from the third chapter.

And the people who noticed this were not just Li Bo, but also Wang Yang, the editor-in-chief of the Great Martial Arts Magazine, and martial arts writers Luoye Silent, Wolong, and others, as well as other people who are good at thinking and have a sharp eye.

Dawuxia Magazine.

Jian Yishen said with excitement: "Editor-in-chief, it is true. Throughout the first three chapters, there are not many martial arts elements. If you don't tell me, I haven't paid attention yet."

Wang Yang smiled and said: "I didn't pay attention before. It was only after reading this third chapter, almost all of the description of the war between the Mongolian tribes, I suddenly discovered it."

Jianyi Shinto: "I hope that Gu Yong didn't notice it himself. After he unknowingly writes this work more like a historical novel, he wants to focus on the'martial arts' again. Very blunt and unnatural. Then, this work will naturally be over."

Wang Yang nodded and said: "It is true. Moreover, he also pulled in Genghis Khan and Mongolia, and the pattern has become larger, and it will undoubtedly become more difficult to control. Therefore, his work now looks beautiful. Infinite, but in fact, these two hidden dangers are buried, and the car may overturn at any time."

"Indeed." Jian Yishen said, the more he thought about it, the more excited he became.

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In the communication group of four people: Silent Falling Leaves, Strong Stroke, Crescent Moon, and Qinsheng.

Luo Ye said silently: "When this third chapter comes out, first of all, it is undoubtedly very exciting. But it seems that there is another hidden danger. What do you think?"

Vigorously said: "The hidden dangers are indeed hidden dangers, but it is too early to say anything. This is only the third chapter. You must read a few more chapters before you can draw a conclusion."

Crescent Moon said: "I really can't draw a conclusion right now. Let's see the next chapter. However, Gu Yong, I shouldn't make such a mistake."

Qin Sheng said: "Leave aside the rest. The rating list will be updated this afternoon. I hope this hidden danger can make the rating of "The Legend of the Condor Heroes" not continue to rise, so that we can bring the rating closer."

"I hope so." Luo Ye silently, vigorously stroked, and Crescent Moon said at the same time.

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Not only the few people from Luoye Silent, in fact, almost all of them are waiting for the update of the rating list in the afternoon.

Of course, in addition to the ratings of "The Legend of the Condor Heroes", everyone also pays more attention to the ratings of the works of Dali Yi, Crescent Moon, Qin Sheng, and Shang Bu Er.

Fans of martial arts fans are still very happy after seeing the update of a few people's works today. Although it is not as exciting as "The Legend of the Condor Heroes", it is already very good.

Before, there is only one, and everyone will definitely be very excited.

The official score list update did not make everyone wait too long.

However, all the martial arts fans were stunned after seeing the latest rating list.

The score of "The Legend of the Condor Heroes" has not changed, and is still 7.3 points in the previous issue.

what's going on? The third chapter that made people so burning and exciting, even the third chapter that Genghis Khan had summoned, did not increase the rating of "The Legend of the Condor Heroes".

The martial arts fans couldn't believe it.

"Isn't the scoreboard updated yet?" someone asked.

"No, it has indeed been updated. Look at "Blood Wind Chime", which has been greatly improved. It has increased from 6.7 points in the previous issue to 6.8 points now. In addition, the works of Mengyue and Jensen have also increased by 0.1. Minute."

The rating list is indeed updated, but why the rating of "The Legend of the Condor Heroes" has not changed?

No one doubts whether the system is malfunctioning, and no one suspects that "The Legend of the Condor Heroes" has suffered injustice.

After all, that is the Jury of the Times Literature Award, and the outside world absolutely believes in its fairness and notarization.

The only explanation is that the Times Literature Award jury believes that the serialization of this issue of "The Legend of the Condor Heroes" is not enough to improve its score.

But why is this? So "unique" in the eyes of the Jury of the Times Literature Award?

The martial arts fans did not understand the situation.

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Recommend a friend's book "The Flower of the Gods Beyond the Shore", which is also an urban category. The author thinks it is very good.

In addition, the author must not tell you that the author of that book is an absolutely beautiful college student.

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