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Let's start a formal comment.

Comments are complicated, especially for a novel of a novel, there are too many places to consider, even more than the creators need to consider. What we see most often is that commentators make comments from a certain aspect, which can be used as a starting point for comments. For example: the characters created by the work and their authenticity, vividness and typicality (such as Grande, Hamlet) ), The unique style of the language of the work and its beauty and corresponding literary meaning (such as the Mark Twain series), the profound meaning contained in the work and the high degree of humanization and socialization of this meaning (such as the old man and the sea, war and peace), The appearance and influence of the work in the specific social environment and human environment of a certain era (such as the tragic world, childhood). This kind of entry point is inexhaustible. Being able to make any entry point sufficiently objective and deep enough requires a fairly high level. For me, this level is not to be expected but unreachable, it is simply beyond sight. Our Chinese novel reviews are somewhat special, and more similar to Jin Shengtan's criticism of the Three Kingdoms. This form of sentence-by-sentence commentary is more intuitive, but if you want to do it, one must have sufficient literary standards and time, and the other is at least a book.

The problem is coming, I have no level, not too much time, and not enough patience, not even Titan's physical book or complete electronic version. Public chapters are okay, at least when you need to find a sentence or a character, you can also find it. If you want to find it in the chapter, you can rely on the reading system, it is simply an activity that can kill people; even if someone has enough memory Okay, I can remember it, but if you want to quote some paragraphs of the work to make an explanation-sorry, please type it yourself ... Oh my god!

I found a bunch of reasons. In fact, what I want to say is: I ’m free to comment on the form, I ca n’t do it too strictly, I ca n’t do it too carefully; the focus of the comment is in the public chapter (although I know the focus should actually be It ’s part of it, but there is really no way to face the endless page-turning search and massive typing tasks); the standard of comments is online novels, not masterpieces.

From the first episode (nonsense, please do n’t mind. Of course I ca n’t say from the last episode, this is not a novel, there is no flashback. In fact, this is a dividing line, ^^)

I liked the beginning of the novel. This way of expressing a large supporting role from a small supporting role and then leading out the protagonist is more intuitive and faster to enter the theme than the method of "blasphemy" and "Saints" starting with a bridge segment; compared to "Dust of History" The method of directing the protagonist in "Feng Qi Zi Luo Xia" is slightly more subtle and more charming. Speaking of this, this kind of beginning is actually the least need to bother. Starting with the bridge section, this bridge section must have an overall view, and the difficulty of the design can be imagined; the direct appearance of the protagonist must have a sufficiently impressive environment to set off. Although this kind of opening has various shortcomings such as lack of expressiveness and lack of attraction, for me, a smoky person who often makes the room, seeing Lieutenant General Mo Lang left, his cigar and his room, already enough.

Then you will see Captain Wick's stinky mouth. Then the conversation between the stinky mouth and Lieutenant General Mo Lang left more vivid. The image of an ordinary officer who is honest and not lacking in wisdom is displayed before our eyes.

Next, General Li Lang left throughout this episode is even more impressive. A large number of cigars and coffee, not angry with the people around you, are enough to show his anxiety-he is still a wise man; he has not given up thinking in the face of difficulties-he has a strong side; when thinking to the end, but only Can think of retirement-his wisdom is only the level of ordinary people; the large floor-to-ceiling windows of the office, the mahogany desk, the ice bear sofa, the expensive tobacco and alcohol-obviously, he is not a clean officer; he understands that he can start quickly after being abandoned Worrying about his safety-he was quite familiar with various conspiracies and tricks; after everything was clear, he was quite happy to accept other people's arrangements for himself-still a little weak. What can such a soldier do as prison officer?

The protagonist played. Most of my dissatisfaction with this episode focused on the expression of Oscar. Look, he is only 15 years old, he can think of a woman and another woman without any guilt; he can deal with subordinates' problems in an extremely fair way, so that the subordinates are afraid and respectful; perfectly deal with communication; Perfect to seduce girls. He possesses perfect force, perfect psychology knowledge, perfect sociology knowledge, perfect criminology knowledge, perfect power art and dark society status. This was nothing, and the protagonist of the novel was already very difficult to shape, especially such a future emperor, who weakened him is even more unfavorable for the subsequent plot development. In this type of online novel, the hero's Gao Daquan is even necessary. But it is such a person who would despise Lieutenant General Li Lang, will be angry with those who despise him, and will be sad because his friend cannot escape from prison. I know that Crescent Moon wants to express a sentimental villain. However, the bad guy's feelings will only be reflected in people who have a close relationship with him. Otherwise, he is either a naive fool or a good person who thinks he is a bad guy. Oscar is certainly not a good person, but he is not naive. The fundamental contradiction of this character is not persuasive.

Dissatisfaction becomes dissatisfaction. I can't think of any way to express it better. This is the fundamental reason why I like this book. I like this kind of subject and like this kind of idea. Although some places will make me less satisfied, but I do not have the level to do better. This gives me the possibility to communicate with the author in the text, rather than looking up like the classics. So, from now on, Oscar is a sentimental bastard, let us remember this. If similar conflicts occur in the future, please refer to here.

The perfect escape begins. I do n’t know if the crescent moon has referenced anything, but I want to say that this jailbreaking operation involving dozens of bad guys under surveillance is perfect. From the determination of the candidate, the long-term planning, the bold and novel ideas The mobilized human force, the use and secrecy of key figures, and the final killings are as classic as textbooks. Perhaps this text should be read ten times?

Dissatisfied again. Dissatisfaction with the character of the emperor. He hadn't figured out how to deal with him when he made the decision to release Oscar? The reason he decided to release Oscar was because a woman reminded him that Oscar was his nephew. Then he forgot that Oscar was his nephew, and he wanted to put him under house arrest? At the end of Oscar's reminder, he remembered this, and immediately sealed the prince? Let me say that even an ordinary monarch, when faced with this problem, can give the following answer within half a day-because of his love for his sister, Oscar must be free; because of the need to maintain the Use, UU reading to put a certain pressure on the Anlu family, so Oscar must not be too comfortable. As a result, Oscar was released, and his prince ’s title would be deprived of his crimes and given the title of Viscount; people must stay in the capital. This can be balanced by the Secretary of State ’s proposal to send Oscar abroad, and then the protest must be brought forward by Anlu Slowly divide the connection between Oscar and Anlu and slowly promote his status, assassinate the Duke of Dortmund to cause differences among the heirs, thus dividing the relationship between the Oscar brothers; if he can control the Oscar, then Oscar will control Anlu, or split the security Lu ’s power; if this goal cannot be achieved, Oscar will also be a test of Anlu ’s attitude, and even threaten Anlu ’s bargaining chip; if Anlu does not care about Oscar ’s life and death, then Oscar will have a great chance to invest in If the central government cares, then in some ways, Anlu must compromise. ——How perfect!

He talked nonsense again for a long time. In fact, I know that the new moon can think of this too. It's just that Oscar must become a prince, and the plot will not be developed without the next face. Under the premise that Oscar must become a prince, the plot of the palace's fighting wisdom is still quite good. Therefore, after I have complained, I will continue to read. The role of the plot is to express human nature, and in these imperfect plots, the performance of human nature has reached a very high level. Therefore, these shortcomings are not fatal.

Oscar became the prince, and the first episode ended.

I have to sleep. 138 Reading Net