~： Calvin, take 1 day off

Let's talk about the book! To be honest, this book was opened by the popularity of Su Xiandao Changqing. At the beginning, I was not used to this way of writing and could not start. I admit that this book has many shortcomings. It’s just about the family. Later, when I wrote about the Qingzi generation, I vaguely understood the difference between a family cultivator and a lone ranger. To be honest, I have read all the family texts from the starting point, but I didn’t read them carefully. I mainly read the comments of readers. Some readers have said that why the pig's foot family is always destroying the family, and other families are only compliant, I can't help but think, why the pig's foot family can rise, and other families can't, burn, kill and loot? Outright scramble? What the pig's foot family can do, why can't other families, some people want to say, you are writing online articles, not red mansions, do you have the level to write red mansions? I admit that I can't write it, but the things I send out first have to pass my level. In fact, the next plot is the scenes of Wang Changping, Wang Changhuan, Wang Qingqi, and Wang Changyue. Wang Changyue is the protagonist's sister. I do It’s not well written, and there’s no plot next? No, there is, but I don't think it's appropriate. For example, Wang Changping found an ancient monk's cave, and the Hui invited the same clan to break the formation. Wouldn't this use Wang Changyue? Or Wang Changping was seriously injured and needed to refine some kind of medicinal pill. Wouldn't that use Wang Qingqi? Or discovering a certain spiritual mine, going out to fight with other families, which requires the use of magicians and alchemists, or discovering secret realms and opening dungeons, these plots are all fine, I think family texts! The most inspirational thing is the plot before the formation of pills. Why do other families always follow their promises? Once the family of pig's feet, there are spirit stone mines and metal ore veins, I also wrote this kind of plot, but I suppressed it a lot and didn't give pig's feet. How many benefits of home, I have enough to suppress the family of pig's feet, otherwise I can get a third-order demon pill, refine a few foundation building pills, and I can add a few more foundation-building clansmen, or find the ancient monk's cave, get A magic trick, but isn't it too easy? I don't think I can write a classic, but I want to write a family essay that I recognize. I can write it when I find metal mines, spirit stone mines or secret realms. The problem is, this is the early stage, a critical moment for a family to rise. , and then the pie fell from the sky, and hundreds of thousands of spiritual stones fell down? I might as well write The Lone Ranger! The whole family worked hard, deducted the expenses, and the profit for a year was thousands of spirit stones. Then the author opened the golden finger, and the pig's foot family occupied a spirit stone mine and metal mine? Dozens or even hundreds of thousands of spirit stones fell from the sky at once? I can't accept it myself, I can write it like this in the later stage, but I can't in the early stage. I sat for a long time today and conceived a lot of plots, but I can't pass this level. A lot of plots, I plan to write farming honestly, starting from farming, not always farming, there will be fights, but I just don’t want to make the pig’s foot family too bad, the idea is not clear, remember when writing a character, a book that Kou Kou read A friend wrote a long review, saying that Xianxia wants to write about love, hate, and hatred, not to fight. There can be fights, but not often. As long as I write Xianxia essays, I will always remember this man. Book friends' comments, this book still has many shortcomings, I admit, I didn't say that other families are not good, don't criticize me because of this, the above are my personal opinions, I'm on the street, I'm not proud, but I think Responsible for this book, that's all,

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