Chapter 710

"Well..." Mingyuan nodded thoughtfully.

It's hot in June.

Shen Yan stayed in the air-conditioned room and didn't want to go out. After updating the chapter, he brushed the comment interface hopelessly, but he didn't want to brush out a long comment!!!

Shen Yan was overjoyed. After reading the comment, he was very excited!

In the evening, Wenya came home from school. As soon as she put down her schoolbag, she was dragged to the sofa by her brother.

"What's the matter?" Gentle and strange.

"Look at the comment!" Shen dares to say that the writer is very excited, saying, "the woman who loves the writing is very good."

Mingyuan's face suddenly froze. What he wrote after picking his head all night was read face to face. I really feel so ashamed!!!

"Poof..."

Wen Ya was drinking water, and it sprayed at once. "Make complaints about it," he said. You're a poor reader, aren't you? You see, the last sentence is still boasting, and the next one is about the woman's character. It's like gathering words. "

Mingyuan blushed. He just counted the words

"There is also this sentence:" the author's writing style is excellent, but his works are not warm. This is the depravity of the market. " Gentle smile way, "my God, this is a sick sentence completely!"

Mingyuan turned white.

"There are only two idioms in a sentence. He used this idiom repeatedly, as if he would not know how to describe good writing except this idiom. He also used the other idiom" not warm, not hot "incorrectly."

Mingyuan's face turned white and red. He was ashamed.

It's no different from public execution!

And still be criticized by people who like nothing!

"Ah, your mouth is too poisonous, isn't it?" Shen Yan took back the computer and said with a slight frown, "the young readers have written a thousand words long article. How much time has it taken? It's full of heart. Do you still think that it's too cruel to despise the poor writing skills of others?"

Wenya couldn't help laughing and said: "brother, you wait. I'll read your novel tonight and write a long review for you! Let's see what literary brilliance is

"No!" Shen make complaints about her eyes, holding the computer way. "I'm afraid you'll come to me tonight and tell me that my novels are mere trash."

"No..." Gentle way.

"It's not like you haven't done such a thing before!" Shen Yan angrily whispered, "I wrote an advertisement copy before. Did you criticize it for nothing?"

Wen Ya touched her nose and said, "I'm not A kind reminder. "

"You can pull it down." Shen Yan dislikes the tunnel, "I'm afraid I can't bear the blow and will stop writing from now on when I'm reminded by your" kindness "

Gentleness had no choice but to give up bitterly.

Ming Yuan could not help but make complaints about it: "you are too mean. Do you know how long it takes a reader to write a review? No matter how bad the writing is, it is also the painstaking efforts of others. You batch it from beginning to end How hard it is for readers to hear. "

"Well, when did you have such empathy?" The gentle man said with a smile, "did you write the comment?"

Originally gentle just casually tease a, Mingyuan is guilty, faltering: "how can I write this kind of thing?"?!! I don't even read novels! "

"If you don't look, why are you so excited?" Gentle and strange.