Chapter 1344： enraptured

The old lady was on the phone all the time, excited, and she didn't even look at the exam papers.

Zhang Wanlin was waiting anxiously, he didn't want to wait here dryly.

Just pick up the script and go out.

As he walked, he said, "Sister, I have changed now.

Talk about it first. "

"Well, good."

Lin Yue didn't notice what Zhang Wanlin was planning to do at all, so she thought that the sooner he was sent away, the better. Now she was talking about serious matters, how could she be sloppy.

That's money. If it's not done well, it's worth tens of millions. This younger brother also ascended to heaven with the dog and the dog.

Zhang Wanlin went to the living room as usual, put up the script, and changed it while comparing it.

This apartment has three bedrooms and two halls, with three rooms, one as a study and two as bedrooms.

The study room was occupied by the old sister, Zhang Wanlin could only stay in the living room no matter whether he was doing homework or playing games.

The living room is his study.

As long as he writes the first word, his mind flashes like a spark, and then more things appear in succession, like the water of the yellow river, surging endlessly, pouring hard, and finally converging in the elegant writing under the pen.

Zhang Wanlin modified the script. The first is to make the story more interesting, increase its inherent tension, and make multiple plots related to each other, foreshadowing, and completely natural.

Second, it is to polish the characters, sublimate the character of the characters from emotion to another level of depth.

If you want readers to remember a character, you have to work **** the subject of the character.

His key target is K and Hua Lian, these two iconic characters in his heart.

These thoughts are all bestowed by A-level literary talent.

After the phone call, Lin Yue realized what Zhang Wanlin had done.

It’s not easy for someone to value it, so you should keep it intact now and wait for someone to review it.

How can it be changed at will?

After all, you are changing when others want to see it. What's the matter?

She had just been together, and the paper on her lap fell.

This is the test paper Zhang Wanlin gave her. I haven't read it yet, and I don't know how many points this guy has scored.

But from what he looked like just now, at least he was taller than before.

Lin Yue opened the examination paper and saw a big scarlet letter: 150.

Full marks! ?

It's not right.

First take a sip and regain your mood.

When Lin Yue put on his glasses again and focused on the examination paper, it was still 150.

15. She believes, but 150...It can be said that Zhang Wanlin didn't get such a good score when he got the top grades in kindergarten. Is this...could it be a copy?

But there is no reason to copy a full score.

Isn't this deliberately saying that there is no silver three hundred taels here?

But if it wasn't copied... "Zhang Wanlin!"

He heard a roar from the Hedong Lion in the study.

It stirred in the house like a storm.

Zhang Wanlin carefully covered his ears, his turbulent thoughts came to an abrupt end...What's wrong with this?

I saw the old sister Lin Yue slapped the paper on the table, "What's the matter?

! "

Zhang Wanlin looked at it: "There is no problem on the paper."

"I'm asking this 150!"

Lin Yue said, "Don't pretend to be garlic, do you cheat again?"

"I swear to God, if I cheat, my old sister will never marry forever..." "You!"

Lin Yue took off the glasses, and when she came up, she hugged Zhang Wanlin and threw it on the sofa. One of her stunts is to itch, which is also Zhang Wanlin's fatal weakness.

"Sister, what I said is the truth."

"Don't do that."

"LOL really."

Lin Yue put her hand into Zhang Wanlin's clothes and scratched her abdomen. Zhang Wanlin struggled for a while, but was pressed by her sister.

The two brothers and sisters tossed from the sofa to the ground, and finally ended with Zhang Wanlin's surrender.

Lin Yue stroked the hair that fell on her forehead, put on her glasses again, and sat on the sofa: "Now you can talk."

"I really wrote this."

Zhang Wanlin said, "If you don't believe it, then you take another test paper and I will write it to you."

"you sure."

Lin Yue approached and asked seriously.

Zhang Wanlin knew what Zhang Wanlin said earlier, she was not absolutely sure, and she would definitely not say that.

"sure."

"Then I believe you."

Lin Yue smiled with a serious expression and kissed Zhang Wanlin's forehead lightly.

"This is a reward from my sister."

"what!"

Zhang Wanlin wiped his forehead disgustedly, "Your saliva smells so..." It really made Zhang Wanlin sick.

I have to wash my face three times later.

Lin Yue was immediately upset. She was also a class figure when she was studying. When she was in college, others rushed to chase her. One kiss from her was enough for others to dream of for three days.

This smelly brother even disliked it.

Before Lin Yue's fist like a sandbag fell on Zhang Wanlin's head, Zhang Wanlin promptly took out the script, "Sister, come and see."

"I changed about twenty chapters."

Lin Yue was surprised: "You changed so much in such a short time?"

Zhang Wanlin said with disdain: "You think I rewrite it again, should I make changes based on the existing foundation?"

"Oh, like this.

Let me see. "

Lin Yue looked seriously.

When working, the old sister Lin Yue always needs to wear glasses.

Wearing glasses, she will appear a sophisticated and quiet temperament.

And once he took off his glasses, the youthful and beautiful breath came upon his face again.

Lin Yue looked more and more seriously.

If the previous script was very exciting, then this one now has many more elements besides being even more exciting.

Emotion, mystery, passion, horror, etc.

More profound themes run through the inside, making the whole story unique.

The sophisticated story technique is truly breathtaking.

"Brother, come here!"

Lin Yue suddenly became serious.

The expression was like something big happened.

"What are you doing."

Zhang Wanlin passed cautiously.

Lin Yue gave Zhang Wanlin a few hard kisses on the forehead.

Her eyes gleamed: "It's really great! I can't imagine what kind of market response this painting will cause!"

"Also, they will definitely appreciate our work. At that time, more than ten million, twenty million is possible!"

Lin Yue got excited and started to move her mouth again.

Zhang Wanlin hurriedly stopped, "Old sister, be merciful!"

Zhang Wanlin washed his face 6 times that day.

At eight o'clock in the evening, as the editor expected, the call came quickly.

"Hello, I am the general manager of Longteng Entertainment Group, you can call me Chen Fei."

"Oh hello."

Lin Yue said as calmly as possible.

"We have conducted a comprehensive evaluation of your work, and have also made a budget and positioning for the future of the adaptation. We believe that the work has great potential."

"However, the violence and depth shown in the work has a lot of shortcomings.

Therefore, the author needs to make adjustments later.

We will use your adjusted work as a reference for re-selection.

"Lin Yue fell directly from the cloud to the ground, and it hurts as much as he fell.

"In other words, you can't be selected for this work yet?"

"For several works in the same period, it is true.

We hope to see the improvement of your work in the next issue. "

Zhiwei Manke is a weekly issue, and now it is Tuesday, which means that the improvement time is only 5 days.

For several powerful works in the same period, it is really difficult.