Chapter 136

Chapter 136

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He Yunxiao, knew that when Fan Zirou said I cant decide on my own, she meant to let him discuss it with her father, Fan Zirou. In fact, this was a polite refusal.

Fan Zirou is conservative in her thinking and has a stable personality, plus she only has a favorability of 76, so He Yunxiao, can understand why she doesnt say yes to the marriage proposal directly.

But now, what He Yunxiao, didnt understand was why the first time she mistakenly said that he was her husband, he could increase her favorability a little. The second time he hinted at it again, it didnt work.

Not being able to understand it for a while, He Yunxiao, chose to leave it for now.

The good news was that he now finally had the same 76 favourability rating as Chu Fan for Sister Zirou. With this 76 favorability level alone, he could already start trying to lower Zirous favorability level towards Chu Fan.

As long as the favorability level of Zirou sister towards Chu Fan was lowered, then he could help her get out of Chu Xiaoxiaos clutches, just like sister Du did back then!

But now was not the time to think about that. What I should think about now was a way to get the cause of Zirous heart knot out of her while teaching her to write the plot.

When He Yunxiao, looked at Fan Zirous blushing pretty face, he felt that there was something special about a dignified beauty with a shy face.

To test the knot in the plot outline, He Yunxiao, decided to spoil the beautiful image of the shy beauty.

Zirou.

The blush on Fan Ziziweis face had not yet faded, and when she heard He Yunxiao, call her, she hurriedly responded, Yes.

Isnt it time we discussed the novel?

Hearing something about novels, Fan Zirou straightened up.

Yes, Young Master just mentioned that one sentence sums up his story.

After she finished, she even thoughtfully handed the manuscript paper with the story written on it, to He Yunxiao,s face.

He Yunxiao, looked at the manuscript paper and carefully explained, Now, we have a relatively clear story line, but its not enough. We still need to have an outline to expand this vein a bit more.

Does Zirou know what an outline is?

Fan Zirou naturally knew, An outline is the gist of the story.

He Yunxiao, said again, Right! Its the main points. These points, when broken down, can also be divided into a setting outline, a plot line outline, a relationship line outline, and a character outline.

He Yunxiao, pointed to the first paragraph of the story in Fan Zirous manuscript paper, Fan Zi adores her brother He Xiao.

Then he said, The so-called setting outline is a synopsis of the various settings in the story. Here, for example, Fan Zi is He Xiaos junior sister. So what sect are they from? What is the martial art they are studying? What are the martial arts sects in their world?

Fan Zis plot is completely up to par.

With her writing power, she didnt have to worry about describing the characters poorly, so for her, it was almost as if she just needed to perfect the outline of the relationship line and then she could start writing the novel.

He Yunxiao,, wanted to say, Zirou, you write very well. But no. He had to pretend to discuss the outline with Fan Zirou to test her heart.

He Yunxiao, took the time to read the synopsis and thought about the previous case where Zirou had increased her favorability a little.

At that time, he had mistakenly stepped into the role of her husband and then made her gain a little bit of favorability. Later, when I tried her again as her husband, I did not increase her favorability.

Why did it go up one time but not the next?

Could it be that the reason for the rise in favorability was the attitude of being her husband, rather than the fact that he had spoken words of love to her?

The attitude of being her husband can only appear once, while love words can be said many times, so when she knows my attitude, I cant reproduce the thing again, so the favorability rating can only go up once. When I tried again the latter time, it had no effect.

But why did she increase her favorability because I had the attitude of wanting to marry her?

Was it because she had tacitly agreed that I wouldnt marry her?

Why would she think that?

He Yunxiao, couldnt figure it out, so he returned his attention to Fan Zirous plot outline.

On the plot outline, there was a paragraph that read, He Xiao rejected Fan Zi who offered him her hand because he felt that she was just more than just his sister.

He Yunxiao, was a bit confused, so he asked Fan Zirou, Zirou, why did He Xiao reject Fan Zi here?

Fan Zirou looked at the manuscript paper and explained, Because although Fan Zi is a junior sister, Fan Zis father and He Xiao are friends.

He Yunxiao, understood that the reason He Xiao rejected Fan Zi was because of ethics. Simply put, Fan Zi was considered He Xiaos brothers daughter, so how could this be done?

The more He Yunxiao, thought about it, the more wrong it became.

Since He Xiao didnt accept Fan Zi because of ethics, is it possible that Fan Zirou as an author, who has this kind of thinking, wont accept me because of ethics?

Its entirely possible!

No wonder she knew that my attitude of wanting to marry her had increased her favorability rating, whereas before, no matter how much I brushed up my favorability level, it would not increase. Its because she had never come across the teacher-student line before, she never dared to think about it!

Fan Zirou values these things the most. She is both my teacher and my student, with such a complicated relationship, it is normal for her to be apprehensive.

When He Yunxiao, thought of the time when he first met Fan Zirou, at that time he had to break the teacher-student relationship with Fan Zirou to become her teacher, just because he was afraid that this situation would arise now.

I never thought that it would still appear.

However, now that he knew the cause of the knot in his heart, it would be much easier to untie it again.